A Shooting Star ..

redmail99 on Jan 23, 2011

Tags: night sky, shooting star, star

Everything happened so fast like a shooting star.

a shooting star …
look at the sky and see it sail …
a shooting star across the sky …
happened so fast, it was perhaps an illusion ..
the illusion of a shooting star in the night sky …
a dream and a longing passed by the star
on the horizon is lost so far.
a shooting star, so it was you for me, like a shooting star, with the hope that you stay, no time to enjoy and avert my desire, everything happened so fast like a shooting star

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Stable on Jan 23, 2011
I really liked that Redmail. It made me think about events in my life
Cinders on Jan 23, 2011
Thank you so much for a wonderful posting. It reminded me of all those passing encounters that could have, but never did turn into something more. Very moving, thanks
tonywriter on Jan 23, 2011
I liked it too and your poem is so beautiful,Thanks
leoforex on Jan 24, 2011
nice posting
SowmyaT on Jan 25, 2011
Nice share
Agasthya on Jan 27, 2011
This is a nice poem and I can relate this with my life instances.
samgoldencoffee on Jan 31, 2011
a shooting star. every lovers’ wish maker…
well written.

A Shooting Star ..

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