A Silent Scene at The World of Mist

Cassle Tang on May 28, 2011

Tags: Consistency, full of question marks, honesty, keep it clean, mistery, play, scenario, silent scene, words don't decay, world of mist

Sometimes, we just need some honesty and courage to solve the whole package of mystery.

Did you know that I care more than I say?
Words don’t decay,
But here, my heart stay.

The pulse I can’t even resist,
Echoing through the world of mist.
We might can’t see,
But your feelings can’t lie to me.

We play a silent scene,
You chose to keep it clean,
This is not a honest thing,
But we don’t lie just to pile up the sin.

The one thing left is consistency.
Will you stay on track or leave with mistery?
Let’s pretend that the time is still plenty.
So what are you going to do with me?

Silent scene full of question marks.
No one answers, no one asks.

23th May 2011, 11:07

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iva75cpb on May 28, 2011
Sounds lonely…
Dreamy777 on May 28, 2011
nice work thanks
Starpisces on May 28, 2011
what a cool poem, impressive.
Cassle Tang on May 28, 2011
@iva, Dreamy, Star: Thanks for all of you! Thanks for reading and commenting my poem, these gave me lots of supports to keep writing.
yes me on May 28, 2011
Liked your run here cheers
Baijayanti Pradhan on May 28, 2011
lovely…yaa, in this world honesty is somewhere missing day by day.
KittyK on May 28, 2011
A lovely poem with meaninful words we can related to!!!
neopisiva on May 28, 2011
This is very profound work,Cassle Tong.I really enjoyed reading it!Great job!
A.Tawnuh on May 28, 2011
i like it, i think i’ll try tp rap it
Christine Ramsay on May 28, 2011
A very well expressed poem.
Rosettaartist1 on May 28, 2011
Profound and well composed.
kanivel on May 28, 2011
Words have failed me to express my feelings about this poem…
Cassle Tang on May 28, 2011
Wow, thanks for all the great comments. I wake up this morning and when I found all the comments from you, my dear friends, suddenly a smile came to my face. Thanks, all of you made my day!
LCM Linda on May 28, 2011
A powerful poem. You portray the silent circumstance very well. Well-done. Look forward to reading more of your works.
Cassle Tang on May 28, 2011
Thanks Linda! I’m still learning to create a powerful poem and I like that I have a very supportive friend like you!
R K Vajpeyi on May 29, 2011
Touching thoughts and words.
realityspeaks on May 29, 2011
Beautiful words Cassle.
Sebastian Onciu on May 29, 2011
Sometimes silence can do more than words!Beautiful poem,indeed!
Ruby Hawk on May 29, 2011
Nice poem.
Tulan on May 29, 2011
I like it.
Dee Gold on May 30, 2011
Love it,waiting for more of your poems
R K Vajpeyi on May 31, 2011
Returned to enjoy it again!
Cassle Tang on May 31, 2011
Thanks for all the appreciations, my great friends! And double thanks for Vajpeyi for your time to enjoy my poem twice! That’s a great honor for me.
Peace Poet on May 31, 2011
Excellent poem with intense imagination and lucid style. The poem is quite spontaneous.
Muhammad Fajar Marthias on Jun 3, 2011
Beautiful poem my friend
Ebbin Jose on Jun 7, 2011
Time is not plenty my friend,
Time is life.
Time is not money my comrade,
Time is priceless.

Love that you lost and time that you passed,
There is no bargain for the two…
Uma Shankari on Jun 16, 2011
Very nice. Liked it.
wonder on Jul 10, 2011
A very good meaning brought out in the poem.
Cassle Tang on Jul 10, 2011
Thanks for all the comments and appreciations! I hope all of you enjoy my poem.
Saurav Banerjee on Jul 12, 2011
Very free flowing expression.
Phoenix Montoya on Jul 17, 2011
Beautiful words my friend and really touching, thanks.
buenavida on Jul 18, 2011
Beautiful poetry, thanks for sharing your thoughts.
mona rastogi on Jul 18, 2011
good one
Wherner5 on Jul 19, 2011
Wow! Look at the likes and comments on this article. I wish I was as popular as you.

Well deserved for a mysterious poem.
The Triangle on Sep 11, 2011
Silent scene full of question marks.
No one answers, no one asks.
Nice!!!!
Tiki33 on Feb 15, 2012
Absolutely wonderful. Thanks for sharing!
Aroosa Gloomy on Mar 25, 2012
This clicked my heart.keep up a good work.
Dhegen on Mar 25, 2012
nice share
Aroosa Gloomy on Mar 26, 2012
again here

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