A simple message for all those ones.

They forget

They forget that they loved me once

They forget they will love me more once

They make mistakes

Yet do not know

How the Thames does flow

My love for all of them

Does simply flow

This I want them all to know

 

 

What is life but a passing phase?

A strife one can’t erase

When you meet me in real life

You will surely realise

How narrow was your mind

Then and now perhaps

An angel like me

Can you ever find?

No perhaps

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

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  • sweet sunshine143 on Nov 20, 2009

    But how can we love you if we don’t really know who you are?

  • LOVELY HONEY on Nov 20, 2009

    ”Just as an ordinary poet

    I learn the worlds’ best poets still live till today

    Unsung

    So be it

    The choice is yours”

    LOVELY HONEY

  • Darla Smith on Nov 20, 2009

    Very nice!

  • wonder on Nov 21, 2009

    Keep flowing.

  • wonder on Nov 21, 2009

    Keep flowing always
    like the Thames.

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Nov 21, 2009

    This is real good. :)

  • Themax on Nov 21, 2009

    very touching LH,Thank you :)

  • papaleng on Nov 21, 2009

    Just reacting to Sunshine 926′ comment. She has a point there our friendship could be much better if only we can know you more. BTW are you a He or a She?

  • A.L.Smith on Nov 21, 2009

    I believe the only one who really knows you, is you. Nobody really needs to know everything about someone else, we all have thought we hope no one ever hears. Great poem again, as always.

  • martinpm on Nov 21, 2009

    Good one!

  • Leonardo davinci Evans on Nov 21, 2009

    Do we master love or does love master us?

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