The simplest poem and the simplest wish.




A simple wish
How I wish
Some one could fly along with me
And  with my loving eyes
The BEAUTIFUL
World also see

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  • ashan1614 on Oct 29, 2009

    Nice wish – I hope it comes true. :)

  • Petalm on Oct 29, 2009

    Every thing is better when shared.

  • larry84 on Oct 29, 2009

    thanks for the share

  • alc on Oct 29, 2009

    good write

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Oct 29, 2009

    Sounds like the chorus of a song. You should take this one further. Very nice.

  • Darla Cooke on Oct 30, 2009

    Nice poem.

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