A Small Talking Poem

wonder on Nov 11, 2010

Tags: Jet lag, net, November, october, poem, small talk, Talk.

This is just to continue sharing with my friends.

November has already come

after October is done

with flying colours

and after flying, a jet lag

or perhaps, a net lag

before it is too bad

I select the right prescription from Healthmad

and set myself again, footloose

tighten my belts to fly

read you along the way

that’s where exactly my interests lie.

To you my friends I renew my bonds,

I subscribe,

my current state

I hereby describe.

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Saurav Banerjee on Nov 11, 2010
It’s short and sweet!!
Shwe on Nov 11, 2010
I just love that line “November has already come”…I get some fresh feeling as if i am startn new life after my bday which was in october…Very nice
Eunice Tan on Nov 11, 2010
Good poem & picture
Raj the Tora on Nov 11, 2010
wow, very nice thoughts indeed. I too started to feel the same
dino renaldo on Nov 11, 2010
good poem
Suni51 on Nov 11, 2010
Okay the November has come, but it is still not pleasant here.
Jet leg of course I am not as Delhi is not far from Bangalrore.
Christine Ramsay on Nov 11, 2010
Very nice thoughts and a lovely poem.

Christine
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Nov 11, 2010
a very delightful and enjoyable poem. jet leg can be really overpowering. thanks for sharing.
gaby7 on Nov 11, 2010
Lovely!
lillyrose on Nov 11, 2010
beautiful Wonder, it is always lovely to read the things you share xx hope you are well xx
albert1jemi on Nov 11, 2010
great share
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 11, 2010
Lovely poetry.
Starpisces on Nov 11, 2010
love this poem, Wonder, don’t stop writing.
By the way, the lovely painting your masterpiece also?
Ramalingam on Nov 11, 2010
Nice.Please compile all your poems for publication and approach some worthy publisher.Thank you.
Chris Stonecipher on Nov 11, 2010
Your poem is well written and fun to read. Thanks for sharing.
Kaye TM on Nov 11, 2010
lovely poem
giftarist on Nov 11, 2010
Lovely thoughts here, friend.
PSingh1990 on Nov 12, 2010
Nice Share.
Abhipray Sahoo on Nov 12, 2010
I love the way you are so good with words.
Baijayanti Pradhan on Nov 12, 2010
lovely thought. I also do the same.
J M Lennox on Nov 12, 2010
Lovely.
Souldose on Nov 12, 2010
Your poetry in heartfelt and beautiful
Tulan on Nov 12, 2010
A good one,
SharifaMcFarlane on Nov 13, 2010
Cute one. Jet lag is so disorienting.
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 14, 2010
one thing i like most
about this triond site
its its popularity
and theory
you read me and i read you
and we shall read each others too
you post comments i shall too
but make it simple
no harsh comments will do
or else i shan’t ever again read you

hope you do
you do
you do
yeah !!!
understand like we all do.
simple poetry
and
no need of history.
LOVELYHONEY on Nov 17, 2010
i read yours and i read it again
what more
what more
what more?
Sharpedon on Nov 30, 2010
Beautiful poem!!
Eunice Tan on Dec 17, 2010
2nd visit.
T. S. GARP on Dec 18, 2010
That was endearing and lovely.
1hopefulman on Jan 6, 2011
Thanks for thinking of us and have fun!
lillyrose on Feb 4, 2011
lots of second visits to this lovely poem x
tani90 on Apr 2, 2011
Lovely poem.The rhythm is so good. still working in my head.Hehe Take care
erwinkennythomas on Sep 14, 2011
imaginative!

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