A Small Toe Tale

1hopefulman on Aug 17, 2010

Tags: broke a toe, don't step on my toe, Facilities, get off my toe, health, hospital, medicine, ouch my toe, poem about a toe, stubbed toe, toe accident, watch out for my toe

My friend called to ask if I could take her to the hospital as she broke her small toe. So I wrote this poem about the experience.

The phone rings
Life stinks
To hospital brings
.
Car ride rush
The night’s hush
Toe’s been in a crash
.
Make toe wiggle
How to stay single
People way too fickle
.
Wait wait wait
Yawns by the crate
Awaiting toe’s fate
.
She’s tired
I’m inspired
A star waiting to be fired
.
Six weeks’ curse
Toe needs nurse
Could’ve been worse

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krrymarie on Aug 17, 2010
thats cool! love it
Lex92 on Aug 17, 2010
Nice poem
buenavida on Aug 17, 2010
Not many can say they have written a poem about a toe!
Spiced with humor and negative turns positive!
pattiann on Aug 17, 2010
nice.
Raj the Tora on Aug 17, 2010
superb lines of poetry. You have a great pen
PARAM on Aug 17, 2010
Nice poem.
carissimi on Aug 18, 2010
cute.. sorry to hear about her toe though
Lord Banks on Aug 18, 2010
A poem of a broken toe that is unusual! should have saved the petrol though they only bandage toes now no splints or plaster! Good work again. LB
BC Doan on Aug 18, 2010
That is a cute poem!
sandcastle on Aug 28, 2010
hope you won’t hurt your toe ,again.
1hopefulman on Sep 13, 2010
Thanks everyone!
RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Sep 17, 2010
a lovely poem that tells the whole story beautifully.
reciel tanaid on Sep 20, 2010
cute poem
1hopefulman on Dec 7, 2010
I had fun with that one! Thanks for reading!
scheng1 on Mar 27, 2011
Fortunately just a toe that gets hurt.

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