A Song by Candelight

Joie Schmidt on Apr 21, 2011

…destiny’s brightest light.

A song of liquid
And lucid nights
And dreams swirling
By candlelight

Toes tip toe
And, hopeful hearts
Skip, in candid
Delight

The touch
Of love’s first
Knowing sight
Paints shades
Of destiny
Hues of boldest
Brightest light

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seashell66 on Apr 21, 2011
I love your visceral images….
CHIPMUNK on Apr 21, 2011
nice one
Anuradha Ramkumar on Apr 21, 2011
Wonderful.
Aiyanna on Apr 21, 2011
Candlelight songs enkindles the romance and the love between two people who mean a lot to each other. Although many have to check the credentials of the people they date…
Beautiful!!!
Phoenix Montoya on Apr 21, 2011
Beautiful, thanks.
Saurav Banerjee on Apr 21, 2011
That’s a great one!!!

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mayank arora on Apr 21, 2011
awssm …………..’
Angelgirlpj on Apr 21, 2011
Lovely poem
sanaahmed on Apr 21, 2011
lovely song
Melody SJAL on Apr 21, 2011
Such a delight to read.
Cyni1106 on Apr 21, 2011
simply lovely
Michael Degenhardt on Apr 21, 2011
The imagery is so soft and beautiful!
yes me on Apr 21, 2011
Liked this very much Joie cheers
sujaysen on Apr 23, 2011
Nice poem.
MissLindsie on Apr 23, 2011
Nice.
quiet voice on Apr 25, 2011
…More beautifully written work. Thank you.
novelist on Apr 26, 2011
Well done. Sincerely.
roe hill on Jun 17, 2011
Lovely verse.

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