A warm rain whets the appetites of young lovers.

I said to her I hear the rain
It sings to you a song of yearning

In its warmth it speaks of love
It longs to wet your face

In its taste it would fall upon your tongue
Reached out to greet its every droplet

In its softness it speaks of gentle touch
It longs to wet your lovely breasts

In its increase it would wet your appetites
Those emotions of your heart awakening

It pours now, it covers you completely
Warm memories of your lover’s hands

She smiles as she turns to me
I see you are as wet as I

I prefer your hands to warm memories
Come now with me, let’s go inside

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Comments (7)
  • Snooky on Nov 23, 2009

    If you dont stay out of the rain and out of the shadows some one is going to need prenatel vitamins. I liked it!

  • Christine Ramsay on Nov 23, 2009

    That is so beautiful. Wonderful imagery. Well done.

    Christine

  • Darla Smith on Nov 23, 2009

    A very lovely poem!

  • diamondpoet on Nov 23, 2009

    Very lovely and damp.

  • salaam on Nov 23, 2009

    Well you know I like the rain. Tactfully suggestive… done in great taste, with excellent opening lines as well.

  • Phantom Beauty on Nov 24, 2009

    So I see youve made friends with your talented target.

  • Svetlana Cherevik on Dec 12, 2009

    just beautiful

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