A Song Unsung

rizzei on Jul 17, 2009

Tags: kismet, love, music, Rain, song, Sunset

Kis⋅met [kiz-mit, -met, kis-]
–noun fate; destiny. Also, kis⋅mat [kiz-muht, kis-]

I sing to remember

I sing to forget

’cause of all the things that matter

it’s loving you i can’t regret

Burning words of love

and these burning feelings i have

would always ignite the flame,

would still blaze under the pouring rain

But the melody ironed in this poem,

the melody that sealed our kismet

now reflects an unsung song

a dying flame, a sunset

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clay hurtubise on Jul 17, 2009
Good job.
Thanks,
clay
sakuragi on Jul 17, 2009
Lovely piece =)
Darla Cooke on Jul 17, 2009
Lovely poem.
Brian Daniel Stankich on Jul 17, 2009
Nicely written, rizzei. Shows that kismet or destiny can be changed. Wonderful message and perspective. Brian
Jenny Heart on Jul 17, 2009
Brilliant. Loved it!
Dee Gold on Jul 17, 2009
kakaiba ito,kaibigan
CHAN LEE PENG on Jul 17, 2009
This is a great poem. I love it too. Liked it.
Elizabeth Abbott on Jul 17, 2009
This wows! So very well written. Thought provoking. Elegant photo.
Deep Blue on Jul 17, 2009
Deeply moving.
Ruby Hawk on Jul 17, 2009
Well done,
George W Whitehead on Jul 17, 2009
Nice poem, Rizz.
Inna Tysoe on Jul 17, 2009
Well done.

Inna
ken bultman on Jul 17, 2009
Beautiful love song. Like a red rose on sheet music.
Francois Hagnere on Jul 18, 2009
Lovely and a superb illustration.
Thank you,
François
goodselfme on Jul 18, 2009
Without the picture, I think this is outstandingly wonderful. It flows and brings the message so well to this reader. Your words are so smooth and carry this piece so well. Needless to say, I adored this composition.
fragile18 on Jul 18, 2009
great! great! and perfect!
didnt mean to take you for granted..
remember nung GA? haha. kis met a chu chu. LOL
Melody SJAL on Jul 18, 2009
That was lovely!
riva on Jul 19, 2009
everyone’s right. it is really nice and worth reading!
LOVELYHONEY on Jul 19, 2009
u draw a croud
who would like to kiss u

kiss if u wish

but if u had said ‘KISS MUT’

it would mean

dont kiss [me]
bearhugs on Jul 21, 2009
I like this poem. It’s beautiful!
papaleng on Jul 23, 2009
nasabi na atang lahat.. Ito lang ang sa akin.. ASTIG ang poem mo anak, touch na touch ako..
lieanne on Jul 28, 2009
just so lovely
herdy on Jul 30, 2009
yeah! hehe..
tyrone on Aug 2, 2009
that was a bit serious rizz
jovelledeguzman on Sep 14, 2009
well… like it… you sang every song you know…
Lily River on Sep 26, 2009
A well written gorgeous piece!

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