Tybalt and Mercucio are both going to be slain…

The ungrateful truth

Tybalt and Mercucio are both going to be slain

Romeo protest the start of a vicious brawls

The news of Tybalt’s death causes Juliet much pain

Under the arm of Romeo Mercucio falls

Juliet dose not want to marry her suitor

Juliet thinks that Romeo and Tybalt have died 

Juliet believes Romeo is cuter 

Juliet was is very sorrowful so she cried

Poor, young Romeo is overcome with grief

Though Romeo is still alive he wishes to die 

Romeo is lucky and is in disbelief

Even though he has killed Tybalt he wants to deny

Juliet is informed that she must remarry 

For these words spoken do not make her merry

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  • Jake on Apr 10, 2009

    There is one main reason why this sonnet cannot work. The reason that it wont work is that there has to be 10 syllables per line.

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