A touching poem written for our men and women who fought in Desert Storm, and for the same who still continue to protect.

We at home think of you
You, a Star in the Storm.

The sounds you hear are like thunder
Artillery explodes all around,
And you wait and pray in your bunker
As the bullets hit the ground.

Somewhere you’re out there alone
While here, we pray for your strength,
Until all of you come home again
American hearts will ache.

You’re out there–getting the job done
And your partner is your gun,
We’re here, with our hearts so warm
For you, A Star in the Storm.

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  • Lucy Lockett on Mar 12, 2008

    A very nice tribute,

  • Dee Huff on Mar 12, 2008

    Touching and nice. It must be so hard for thos left at home.

  • IcyCucky on Mar 12, 2008

    Beautiful tribute..

  • warAngel on Mar 12, 2008

    loved it so much I think of those over seas when i read it.

  • Ed Moore on Mar 13, 2008

    Hi Mary…My son was in the Marines in Iraq. He’s home now, but this is a very touching poem. Very nice work!

  • Liane Schmidt on Mar 14, 2008

    Beautiful.

    Best wishes.

    Sincerely,

    -Liane Schmidt.

  • Moses Ingram on Mar 23, 2008

    A beautiful poem.

  • Susan on Apr 3, 2008

    Very beautiful tribute.

    Susan

  • Shames on May 6, 2008

    Beautiful, and nicely written.

  • Unofre Pili on May 7, 2008

    Liked it very much.

  • Ruby Hawk on May 17, 2008

    Thank you for the tribute to our men and women in the service of our country.. I have one grandson who is in Iraq now on his second tour, and one who came back in January.

  • deepbluesea on May 21, 2008

    Very beautiful!

  • Steven West on Jun 7, 2008

    Wonderful tribute to our brave men and women that are facing many perils abroad.

  • bethann on Aug 3, 2008

    Thanks for the lovely poem anout Star in the storm…my husband served in desert storm and it was a challenging time for me.
    Thanks for the kindness shared.

  • Mary on Aug 21, 2008

    Thank you all for your wonderful comments!

    :-) I appreciate every single one. There was a lot emotion in writing this poem. That was my inspiration.

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