I don’t envy what you are going through but hopefully being able to write down these feelings will help a little. A very expressive piece.

Christine

A lot of fellings here, well express.

a gripping painful sense of emotions .. here you seem to catch the cruelty, the hypocrisy, the blindness that lends to this write well done Shadow

An expressive piece.

I can feel the anguish in this poem.

I also get a sense of self imposed slavery or societal oppression that you yearn to break free from.

Very cathartic.

Jerry

A multitude of feeling’s and a need to get them out, what a write my friend!

Good Post.

Wow!!! Great write and read. This is very powerful.

yep i second that a powerful post it is … plus sad and true too … few can easily relate …

Smooth flow of expressions, good job. Liked it.

Great writing. I like this

If it’s state of your mind, hope when your can write down, you can sense better.

Good interpretation of feelings

very vivid prose of emotions

Cheer up, after the storm there is always a calm.

Great way to express the madness perceived within ourselves, great post Shadow

very nice post

Another great bit of writing cheers

This is the example of great writing. Thanks

Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

Thanks and cheers.
Sara

Don’t ever give up.. there are lots of things that you can be happy of….
Live love… That’s what keeps us going