This is a tale about the emergence and development of the Dunn’s River waterfalls, Jamaica: It describes the waterfall’s captivating beauty, through the use of a melody produced by its buzzing sound. The melody has no rhythm (big joke) so it doesn’t rhyme; but it starts out quietly and crescendos through the different magnificent scenes. Then as it reaches it’s climax, the waterfall crashes and bellows, before it finds its destination into the sea.

Way up in the heart of the Ocho Rios Mountains

a stream springs out of a mass of rocks

and slithers down a slushy sand slope

to slumber in a bed of small stones.

But finds no support in these shelly soft shale,

it scales the scapes for a place to call home.

Then it meets up with a babbling brook,

that pumps in gallons and strengthens the force.

Forging its way through dolomite lime stones,

plowing grassy pathways with youthful strength,

surging along through thick, deep gorges,

disgorging itself over gigantic crest lines,

and spreading out over layers of rocks.

Still no home it finds, so it gushes along,

forming shallow pools here and deep pools there

with huge whirlpools dancing frantically

then swirling fitfully, inside of their rapids.

Then it cascades down some towering rocks,

plunging its gallons into a massive basin below,

spuing out yards and yards of misty vapor,

producing the effects of a beautiful rainbow

with light shining forth in dazzling brilliance.

And then the fall crashes and bellows

with the roaring sound of a mighty thunder,

deafening the world near and yonder.

And then the river finds its home

in the estuary of the Ocho Rios Bay.

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  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 11, 2009

    Beautiful work. I love poetry about water.

    Christine

  • denzil on Jan 11, 2009

    I makes me feel like I’m climbing this waterfall. Beautiful description.
    Denzil.

  • Uma Shankari on Jan 12, 2009

    Vivid portrayal of the waterfall. I was there at the fall, seeing it all in its glory in my mind’s eye.

  • Mythili Kannan on Jan 12, 2009

    You brought the real picture before my eyes :)

  • Abdul Sabour Ayoubi on Jan 12, 2009

    A great job, well done. I enjoy reading it.

  • denus on Jan 14, 2009

    REally great work.

    keep it up.

    cheers,

    denus

  • monica55 on Jan 14, 2009

    I wat to say “thank you” to everyone for their encouraging comments on this waterfall. I had to edit, edit, and edit some more until it came out the way I wanted it. “thanks again.
    Monica

  • Dadsey on Jan 27, 2009

    Great going. How i’d love 2 be there.

  • P.Smith on Feb 2, 2009

    That’s a beautiful waterfall.

  • Dewdrops on Feb 7, 2009

    It is a facinating waterfall. Love it

  • Primrose on Feb 14, 2009

    What a beautiful description of the waterfall?

  • Lisa Clayton Williams on Feb 18, 2009

    Beautifully written….enjoyed reading this!! I could picture it in my mind…lovely!

  • Thomas L. Jones on Feb 18, 2009

    It is quite an experience visualizing this idea.

  • cleblanc on Apr 6, 2009

    pretty.

  • martin on Jan 13, 2010

    very interesting….great choice of words..very nice

  • Tiah on Jan 15, 2010

    Its really good aunty monica and vivid! coolio.

  • Sheena on Jan 27, 2010

    This is a lovely poem, I really liked reading it.

  • deep blue on Apr 5, 2010

    I like the flow, indeed it was a falls. Well expressed Monica.

  • CHAN LEE PENG on Jun 30, 2010

    A brilliantly written poem with a beautiful layout and expression.

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