I’ve seen people leaving people. But there were more things which spoke to me of their solitude and it was harder to bear theirs…So I let it down and flow…

 

How’s a  flamboyant campfire in its last hours?

Danced and drunk around,

Then bereft of the music,

And left to be burnt alone.

 

How’s an untainted drop of rain in its fall?

Squirting mad to cuddle sludge,

Then blamed of its filth,

To be rebounded to eleven pieces.

 

How’s the mighty sun in twilight?

After a day of illuminating visors,

Who shut the door on its face at dusk,

And let it drown alone.

 

How’s a burly glass of beer in its last sip?

Drunk from,

To hush one’s grief,

Then spurned like a whore,

At a foreigner’s lips, besmirched, bare.

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  • nare on Nov 3, 2011

    what an awesome piece of poetry

  • Neha Thakur on Jan 29, 2012

    thankyou..but that’s saying too much..I’m learning..

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