Just a poem… Enjoy!

I was looking at the sun,

At its horizon, setting low,

I could not move my eyes,

Wow! What a show.

This is the show,

That Nature gives us, everyday,

But, we think of nothing other than us,

So, we turn our faces away.

One does not do,

Properly, his duty,

To look around him,

At the beauty,

Of these God-made things,

Just like us,

But we instead,

Would rather, watch the making of a bus.

But, that is an artificial thing,

That means, it is made by man.

We should look at the beauty of nature,

And do what, we can.

We can plant more trees,

And, make a world that is green,

And, instead of polluting,

Keep it clean.

Like that, you can,

Achieve something true,

Something that will,

Always be with you!

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  • drelayaraja on Jun 6, 2010

    Wonderful poem.

  • sasuke191 on Jun 6, 2010

    Thank you!.. :)

  • Starpisces on Jun 6, 2010

    Lovely poem, make me appreciate nature more, reminds me of my earlier post “sunshine & raindrops” (though totally different meaning)
    :)

  • sasuke191 on Jun 6, 2010

    cool!.. Your post is really nice.. :)
    Thank you for checking my one..

  • Brenda Nelson on Jun 6, 2010

    For sure we need to start putting our environment ahead of other factors, we need to keep the earth, water, and sky, clean.

  • papaleng on Jun 6, 2010

    good poem, Nature Lover..

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 6, 2010

    A good poem. Nature really inspires art.

  • Joie Schmidt on Jun 6, 2010

    So lovely*

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • yes me on Jun 6, 2010

    Nice sentiments and message to cheers

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 6, 2010

    Wonderful outlook.

  • VTech on Jun 6, 2010

    Good Post

  • banosorio on Jun 6, 2010

    nice poem. :)

  • sasuke191 on Jun 7, 2010

    Thanks all of you for checking it out..
    Im very happy you guys liked it.. :)

  • priyaa on Jun 7, 2010

    Very nice and natural presented post. Thanks

  • Mifra Khan on Jun 7, 2010

    wow!!! muffin likie!!!

  • sasuke191 on Jun 7, 2010

    Thank you for reading this poem!..
    Will always please me when you all like my poetry!!!.. :)

  • sara20 on Jun 7, 2010

    Excellent manner and very well-written sentence is doing, with useful information includes a good things you have in your article.

    Thanks and cheers.
    Sara

  • sasuke191 on Jun 8, 2010

    Thnx sara20!.. ^^

  • Ann Yo on Jun 26, 2010

    This is an inspirational poem worthy to be recommended. Thanks for sharing this piece of information. 5*

  • sasuke191 on Jun 26, 2010

    Thanks Ann Yo!.. Glad you liked it!…. ^^

  • nayabingi on Jul 3, 2010

    inspirational stuff

  • sasuke191 on Jul 3, 2010

    Thanks!!… ^^

  • Joseph Scott on Jul 31, 2010

    Great poem! Natural beauty is always breath-taking :)

  • sasuke191 on Jul 31, 2010

    Yeah!.. It sure is!!.. ^^

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