Inspired by Priscilla Renea’s Dollhouse, this poem speaks about individuals who feel like the people they love suddenly turned cold on them, made them insignificant and/or took them for granted.

You continue to stare at me.

But not with the eyes I saw before.

For there was happiness and excitement when you looked at me

Through the front window of the toy store.

Now, your face was blank—

Like I am nothing but an eyesore

 

You grab my right arm with your right hand

And raise me high above your head.

Your grip is tighter than usual

And unlike when you used to hug me on bed.

You swing me back and forth; my shoulders tear—

If I were human I would have bled.

 

You hold me at eye’s level

And move your face closer to mine.

Will you kiss me again

And make me taste those lips of sweet red wine?

But to my surprise, you spit!

Your acidic saliva burns and stabs me like tine.

 

You throw me into the trash bag

And get ready for work with joy.

I can see a portion of your face at the mirror—

Smirking as if to annoy.

My heart cries out and shouts but you do not hear.

That’s right. Because now to you; I am nothing but just a useless plain old toy.

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Comments (9)
  • drelayaraja on Jun 17, 2010

    Well crafted story. Nice one

  • NIYATI BHAT on Jun 17, 2010

    AWE! SO SAD! AND WONDERFULLY DESCRIBED PAIN. :(

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Jun 17, 2010

    A good poem.

  • Likha on Jun 18, 2010

    I hope you feel a lot better now. Ganyan lang talaga kabayan, bangon lang nang bangon. Good thing you can write your pains away.

  • papaleng on Jun 18, 2010

    very nice story

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 21, 2010

    Oh, what a mean person of interest.

  • Lipstick on Jun 23, 2010

    deep sad feelings expressed in poetry
    i can feel the emotions
    nice share (^_^)

  • ladydryle on Jun 26, 2010

    oh my, i won’t be like that to my old toy…infact whenever i see them around i wud stare at it with a smile recalling the old good times i spent with the particular toy…it somehow became a part of my life…(^_^)

  • James Henry Abrina on Jul 4, 2010

    It reminds me of “The Forgotten Toys.” A really good movie…

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