There is a scene between Arwen and Elrond in Return of the King where she is asking him to tell her what he saw in her future. He tells her that he sees sorrow and death. As he unfolds to her his vision, the scene shifts to a possible future of hers where she is seen meandering through a dreary wood. She approaches a great bier and on it a marble coffin wherein lies the dead king. The sunset goes down behind her. That is the inspiration for this poem.

The path behind—
a course through lonely wood,
where once you roamed together, sharing smiles,
and dared to measure all that’s green and good.
The path is now behind
—so many miles.

The days have gone—
declined to memory,
and still you stand, grey-robed, there at the toe
of his dark-marbled bier, in misery.
The days have hid away,
—where did they go?

An age has passed—
retreated to the West,
and here you linger, tears like orange cloud
still clotting in your skies, and on your chest.
An age has passed away
—beyond the shroud.

Your life has dimmed—
there’s nothing left but grief,
and you remain, forgetful of tomorrow,
the dust of yesteryear on your kerchief.
Your life has dimmed to naught
—you stay in sorrow.

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  • Jasin on Jan 8, 2009

    What a great freaking idea for a poem, I loved it.

  • A Wallbank on Jan 8, 2009

    Your poems are always a pleasure to read. Thank you.

  • CutestPrincess on Jan 8, 2009

    you’re a great poet!

  • Inna Tysoe on Jan 8, 2009

    Captures that scene well.

    Thanks,

    Inna

  • trishia on Jan 8, 2009

    A delight to read! It’s lofty,yet serious. So well written.

  • Morgana on Jan 8, 2009

    I can see the scene as I read the poem. I like the air of mystery and sadness. I agree with Trishia, it is a delight to read, so beautifully done.

  • Christine Ramsay on Jan 8, 2009

    Wow! You have such a way with words. Brilliant

    Christine

  • nutuba on Jan 8, 2009

    This is beautifully done! You capture the essence in a beautifully flowing way.

  • Holly J. Harrington on Jan 8, 2009

    Very good.

  • James DeVere on Jan 8, 2009

    Intro implies a story but a poem unfolds. Reminded me of the scene in Mel Gibson’s Apocolypto; where a child prophecies the end of a civilisation.

    I liked its’ length – pithy and evocative. Thank-you . j

  • Karen Gross on Jan 8, 2009

    So hauntingly beautiful – Tolkien would be proud! Arwen, chosing to stay in the world of men, sacrificing her place on the boat to immortality in favour of the hope of joy for a while with Aragorn, until the time of payment drew near. But alas, “There at last when the mallorn-leaves were falling, but spring had not yet come, she laid herself to rest upon Cerin Amroth; and there is her green grave, until the world is changed, and all the days of her life are utterly forgotten by men that come after, and elanor and niphredil bloom no more east of the Sea.”
    The movie just didn’t do it justice!

  • Johanan Rakkav on Jan 9, 2009

    I love the way both ideas and rhymes are interwoven: very skillfully and evocatively done.

  • S A JOHNSON on Jan 10, 2009

    Nice!

  • Brent on Jan 11, 2009

    WOW, man,… this is cool. you captured that moment really, really well. i could actually feel her pain in your words. i\’m adding you to my reading list, cos you look like you\’ve got real talent.

  • Jeoffrey Meister on Jan 11, 2009

    Excellent poem, Adam!

  • Shannon Lynn Farlouis on Jan 12, 2009

    You are really good at this. You are an inspiration to many.
    I admire your writings. Great job!

  • eddiego65 on Jan 14, 2009

    Superb!

  • Sarah Elizabeth Hume on Jan 16, 2009

    This is absolutely enchanting,inspirational, and so vivid, your talent is very clear to me, ty for writing, I love the works of Tolken..

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