A True Fact (Sedoka Verse)

Priyanka Bhowmick on Nov 22, 2009

Tags: child, child labour, genre of poetry, innocence, poem, Poetry, sedoka, verse

Sedoka: six lines of 5-7-7-5-7-7 syllables.

the best quality,
of a child is innocence,
but does that exist with him?
he’s being thrown into,
the undeserved labour world,
leaving innocence behind.

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Sukhdarshan on Nov 23, 2009
thanks for raising awareness for the …”..Jis bachey di muskaan da koee dharam nahiN te azaad hai jis di khushboo…”

thanks for sharing…all the best.
Sue Nuckles on Nov 23, 2009
What a sad poem, but, something that needs to said. One voice can become thousands, then millions. Thanks for speaking out. I am old now, but, my heart breaks for children who are forced into labor.
wonder on Nov 23, 2009
So many are tortured to top it all. Society should be more vigilant.Your pen will work wonders one day.
drelayaraja on Nov 23, 2009
Great thoughts. Well composed.
Goodselfme on Nov 23, 2009
I too feel saddness for the children you describe so well in your poem.TX for this awareness in our lives. It hurts us all to have our young being treated as you state.
goindia on Nov 23, 2009
Child labour is like ruining childhood.

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abhishek40914 on Nov 23, 2009
thanks for raising voice for this issue. but the problem is we all read we feel sad and move on. nothing concrete happens.
Prometheus Ridley Scott on Nov 23, 2009
Excellent awareness. Thanks
Themax on Nov 23, 2009
very true my friend,I really hate child labor in depth of my heart,
Wonderful share and amazing thoughts,Thank you !!!
Rinks Desai on Nov 23, 2009
wonderful….thanks for the share…
Teves on Nov 23, 2009
Nice poem…
Jenny Heart on Nov 23, 2009
Thought provoking!
Sunitha Stalin on Nov 23, 2009
Good thought
Hansika on Nov 24, 2009
nice one….thanks for the share

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