its a really great story about friendship

I really liked this part “One who never pisses
Your ass off”. Friends these days are really good at ‘pissing your ass off’. But the fact is that a friend as described in the poem is really hard to find because this poem reflects the outline of an ideal friend.

While some of it is cliche, and other aspects are perhaps over the top and exemplary of expectations that are too high, it still has the touchy, heart-warming quality. My friend doesn’t have to be my savior and most of the time, my friends still pis me off, but if they can help me to restore focus when I drink and go insane, then it is all worthwhile.

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it really a good poem which should be keep in mind for all friend . All people can not get chance to meet real friend but who will be very lucky if he/she got real friend as like as you poem .

The punctuation and capitalization is terrible in the first part of the article. The poem is funny and witty though.

I was touched with the poem’s message because it is hard to find a true friend nowdays. A friend who will be with you thru ups and downs, side by side or miles apart.

This poem is really good. It’s about friend the mean of this relation. It’s like life. We really found of friends. We won’t be live happly without friends.

It is a great poem!!! I love it! To get a true friend is very difficult. This poem reveals exactly how a true friend should be…. I am lucky to have a true friend with many qualities in the poem….

A friend has to be true to you. A friend is not to hide our flaws cover up our misdoings, but to help us when we fall. and helps us back into the right track when we are lost. A friend has to be there when needed most.

A great poem , talking about what should be in true friend but i think its a dream to have a friend like that .

The content is so true and well written, but flow and structure of the poem can be improved. Overall I enjoyed reading it.

The description of a true friend is real, however the poem could be better written.

The poem is so realistic and based on facts so I really like it and appreciate your writing skills.Great work buddy

The poet sounds like they have truly known a great friend. I’m sure most of us can relate to having had a trusted,depended on and appreciated true friend. This is a really lovely and meaningful poem.

The punctuation and grammar are grossly inconsistent and there is not much in the way of meter. As well, neither Shakespeare nor Johnny Cash, the master of imperfect rhymes, would have attempted to rhyme “alone” with “one”; it is just wrong. Apart from that, it is quite an amusing and pithy poem.

I think This is a very sincere and natural of any Human being
It is What we admire and hope to be True , to get comfort and
Security

This is a nice poem as it sheds light on the qualities of a true friend. If even some of the qualities exist, he is scott-off. The peot has shed light on all the values that defines a true friend.

This is truly a good presentation of how true friendship is and should be. We all know that divided we fall and united we stand.. this power comes from true friendship.

In some ways, the poem is nice.
However, it does not apply to everyone; it only applies to the real author of the poem. As what we can see, he/she (the author) defines what an ideal friend is, thus, that is absolutely subjective.

Not all of the characteristics mentioned are applicable to everyone. As for me, I like juvenile friends. The first line of the poem itself is contradictory to my ideal.

Now, what is interesting about this poem is that, it is written nicely and expressively without any bias at all. But i think all poems are. In fact, you cannot argue with the author of the poem as well as the author can force you to believe in what he is saying in his poems.

I REALLY LIKE IT. AND THE GREAT PART IS….
One who keeps you company when you’re sick and alone
Like i said one who does you a great favour when you need one….

THIS IS GOOD

this is a nice poem specifying all attributes of a god friend.though it’s difficult to have one with all these qualities.i liked it.

the writer arranged the definition of true friend nicely.in addition, overall the poem can be the verifier of finding the true friend

I liked this poem because it read easily and had rich content.

The poem flows well: the poet invites the reader to experience what they consider to be a true friend. I would like to see some of my friends bare some of those traits. I like this poem a lot.

This is well written and described words which for a real friend. It takes years to know a person more. Being imbalance for each other makes undesirable effects. So keeping warm, improvements, cooperating, and no telling lie is most important things to share moments between best friends. It is not all about education and family. Person should behave with willingness.

Very well written, very smart use of words. The writer can connect and relate to the narrator and laugh and say, hey! my friends are like that! Very comical, I liked it!

I liked the poem because it talks about the real meaning of friendship. A lot of people can relate to this because of its content. I would like to think that the writer of this poem has found one such FRIEND.

The facts about best friend & true friend!

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That is a wonderful poem. You have successfully described what a true friend is. So sad if one doesn’t have such friend like that. However, let’s not just dream of having that kind of friend. It would be selfish. Instead, why don’t we upgrade ourselves and BE that true friend for others! Let’s learn how to be a true friend from this beautiful poem and then, combined with the thought that GIVING is much better than receiving, let’s GIVE others our TRUE FRIENDSHIP! That way, true HAPPINESS is in our hand!

This poem is awesome. The rhymes are great, the words are beautifully written yet simple to deliver the message. If the whole world are filled with people like this, it would just be as wonderful as the poem

The poem really sounds good. Dramatically composed. Cant happen in reality all the time though. It is more about love than friendship. Hope everyone can get a good friend the way you have mentioned. Really like it….

The poem is very precise and direct when it comes to describing a true friend. The author of this poem is really lucky to have found one. It is very seldom to find a friend that will stick with you be it in good times or bad, that’s why for me I make friends easily but I only trust a couple of them and consider them as my TRUE friends.

Well as far as I am concerned the poem are made for a friend.It is true real friends never leaves us come what may and be there when you needed them most esp when your broken.

I do not like the style of this poem as I find it jarring, crass, and unrefined. I found punctuation mistakes, which may be an intentional style, but one I do not care for. I understand the point the author is trying to make, but I simply don’t like this poem.

not my kind of poems but not my language ither.
it is worm and pretty
has nice rimes

This poem is very much natural. But sounds little bit depressing, if someone is talking about the topic of true friend, then it will surely provides smile to your face, but this one is not

Unconditional love.. uhm… all levels of love must have bounderies and limitations. I just don’t totally agree with this one.. be realistic..

Dear Sir/Madam,

I recently joined Freelancer.com where you had announced that you wish someone to read,rate and comment on articles.

I am very much interested in this offer but unfortunately I cannot place a bid as I had accidentally made a technical error and had not chosen my areas of expertise carefully.

I am am amateur poet myself, here is just a samples of my work. I wrote this when my best friend died. But I have written many more poems than this. I hope this will prove my suitability for the job!

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Roses are Red and Violets are Blue
My Dear Beloved Friend,
We will definitely remember your friendship and Brotherhood so true!

Why have the hearts of your friends grown so weak?
Why does the voice of those who remember you tremble and seek
Your advice and good counsel, which is wisdom that can be reaped!

Had I thought you were lost I would search for thee.
In the chaos of cities and savage jungles, behind every dark tree
But since I know now that you are among the blessed
I shall pray for you; and remember your favors until the sun is red tinted

Had I not been aware that all death is common
Had I not known that God’s great plan is very much in motion
Had I not seen that this world is an illusion
I would wonder much when and how I would see you again, without the slightest intuition

You are indeed lucky, My Companion, My Brother
I have no choice but to meet you soon in the beautiful hereafter!
Please wait for me at the gates of Heaven and be not hasty
I know it’s a really enchanting place, full of delights, and flowers so bloomy

You need not worry for the questions of the grave,
For you are one of God’s chosen ones; and a man very brave
However, I shall miss your beautiful voice and recitation
The recitation of God’s book; of God’s great love and earth’s creation

I have heard of Heaven, where there are Gardens under which rivers flow
It has a dazzling sky and many more wonderful things, the extent of which only God will know
I too would not mind coming to meet thee
But it so happens, I have some unfinished business of My Flower to attend to, urgently

But until then, Peace and Blessings be with you My Brother;
And all the other good things, that cannot be found on an earth; now so darker

May Angels guide thee and help thee in thy lofty quest
The quest of finding your Lord and My Lord, The One who loves us without detest
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Kind Regards
albertsatinsky@gmail.com
(I am sending this message as a comment because your website has a problem of accepting my personal message)

“One who when you’re in trouble,is your great saviour”, this line from the poem is something I feel is really something friends should be. They should always be there for you no matter what, in any situation. If they are really your friend then they would be. This is a great poem, I like it.

Oh My God I like This Poem Very Much Its touching On Soul Really I don’t see and hear this poem before.Great Carry On Work.

It is one of the best poem that i have found about FRIEND.Though it is too difficult to have all these qualities in one person……but me like the thought.

Few lines were great and mirrors todays world as(s) it is. At the same time Funny

Hey Its really amazing and heart touching!
I simply loved it.

nice one………..