Well expressed to the point I felt that pain too. Wishing you well!

Wonderful piece, very emotional, I liked it!

I like it, i could feel the emotion. Nice work

Emotional and aching. I think we can all relate.

Sadly, these feelings are clear and can be relived by many I’m sure, like myself. You expressed these feelings so well and fluidly. Michael

This is heart breakingly sad. Okay, breakingly is probably not a word. Whatever. lol. Your work is always full of such raw emotion. I love it!!!

You truly touched my heart. I felt your pain. very nice write.

Nice and well written!

lovely.

A heart rennding one, and yes the sky is always gray when the light goes out, and I’ve noticed that it usually rains for good measure.

very heartfelt flowing writing.

Pain and sorrow, with strong emotion, enjoyed this poem

Such great sorrow… A very heart-felt poem.

I am catching up on my reading so please forgive me. Wonderful piece my friend . Such a lovely transcribed piece as usual.

Great poem, thanks.

Beautiful poem, nice one

I’m sure we’ve all felt that at one time in our lives. You’ve expressed it so emotionally here.
BTW – Most of my best writings have come when I’ve felt this way. I don’t know if that’s good or bad.

Very soulful. Great write as always!

Beautifully written and full of emotion.. I also really like the structure! Great piece!!!

Beautifully written and full of emotion.. I also really like the structure! Great piece!!!

A.M. McDonald

Well done.

Straight from the heart…very nice.

That was beautifully done.

Thank you,

Inna

Touching, very well done.

Amazing how much emotion can be felt here.

great piece

painful

Ok… ‘Nuff said… I especially agree with the 1st commenter goodselfme! I guess anyone who exudes so much LIGHT must have a little deep inner darkness!

awwwww! How very sweet and touching. ~T

So poignant and touching. Nice work again, Liane. God bless.

Very emotional Liane.

This is so full of feelings, beautifully done.

full of emotions

Soft, sweet, smooth and so sad. Very lovely sweet lady.

Lovely and full of emotions!

I loved this poem. It has such emotion.

Amazing job, I go through a lot of that stuff.
Check out my poems, i hope you like them.
Thank you!

“The quiet, the caress,
The hope he left behind
Leaves me wondering, leaves me aching
For what is, no longer mine”

That could not have been written without having been felt. Hope you’re okay.

The poem was heart-achingly beautiful.

This is a beautiful poem, I can feel the pain behind the words,
very well expressed

broken hearts stink,it happens in life to the best of us:(
your pic and words are well put!

Your poems are always very uplifting..thanks and take care!

Oh the ache of love’s longing. Great capture.

this was an excellent read. the wording and style, as well the meaning of the poem, all very well done. thanks

Made me want to cry.

Very nice, Liane. You have a great talent for poetry.

The final stanza is very powerful; but in retrospection or reality, my dear, should you have those feelings then you certainly have possession of the most intimate of gifts.

I really enjoyed reading this piece. The emotions are strong here.

This is full of passion,offsetting the loneliness that later comes. For I feel it’s better to have loved once;than not at all.

nice poems; they capture emotions well.

nice piece from you! you keep me liking your works..i enjoyed reading them even they are a bit sad..you know..:)