A Very Bad Rhyme

Lady Sunshine on Jan 7, 2010

The title says it all. Please don’t hurt me.

Moi?

A femme fatale?

I think not!

I’m simply a geek,

whose lost her chic.

Just like Little Bo Peep,

whose lost her sheep.

I don’t know where it went,

but it surely leaves me spent.

Chasing it all over town,

making me look like a clown.

Wasting all my money,

leaving me with no honey.

I am no temptress,

I’m more like a tempest.

Blowing a lot of hot air,

filling me with despair.

Wandering all about,

wracked with self-doubt.

Sexy I am not,

even though I’m hot to trot.

Like a lustful librarian,

who jumped a barbarian.

Oops, did I say too much?

Oh well, who gives a double dutch!

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ken bultman on Jan 7, 2010
Heh, heh. What’s a double dutch? I might be interested.
drelayaraja on Jan 7, 2010
interesting
Guy Hogan on Jan 7, 2010
A fun and happy poem to begin my morning. It starts the day off just right.
Reilley on Jan 7, 2010
Mmmmmmm, librarians. Yummy.

Seriously though, very nice poem.
Atanacio on Jan 7, 2010
I give a double dutch cuz I liked it
Christine Ramsay on Jan 7, 2010
It sounds as if you are a bit down on yourself. Chin up. Good work.

Christine
bailieman on Jan 7, 2010
Loved the line ‘Like a lustful librarian’. Brilliant
Themax on Jan 7, 2010
ha ha cute and beautiful sunshine Happy new year and take care
fishfry aka Elizabeth Figueroa on Jan 7, 2010
It seems you like to play with words and you do it well
Awesome
maranatha on Jan 8, 2010
Sounds like a wacky funny Friday -
Shirley Shuler on Jan 8, 2010
Hi Lady Sunshine, absolutely brilliant, loved it!
papaleng on Jan 8, 2010
This ain’t no bad rhyme, this is fantastic, cute and humorous, love it Lady Sunshine..
Val Mills on Jan 9, 2010
You are a wonderful poet.
deep blue on Jan 11, 2010
My two thumbs up. Now take note of this, when you’re bad you’re better. So better ruin your day all the way ’round and I could expect for something more creative. ‘Just kidding, take sometime to relax. Take care my friend.
AlmaG on Jan 20, 2010
I agree with Max. It’s very cute

Hi there!