What an eye saw…

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A watchful eye saw something new today.

It was the cornea; the inside of human mind and conscience, where data is confirmed and rendered.

It looks around, taking in the atmosphere, registering images as the pupil retracts.

It is a bright day as the eye looks around, enveloping the sight.

Eyes cannot take in the smell of it

Eyes cannot feel the dank, heavy air in which it lingers, unavoidable as CO2 emissions and yet as invisible as oxygen.

But most of all, eyes cannot hear the resounding feeling of loss and sorrow.

They are limited to what is seen first; they are limited to first impressions.

            It is a field in Africa, where this eye scans the mess.

            “Africa’s darkest jungle is where Africa got its rumble.”

            It is not a pile of bodies, nor a pile of limbs.  It is something larger than that, but smaller in contrast.

            It is not a miniscule specimen of mosquitoes, or a tree deformed from machete sharpening. 

            It is a mark.

            A mark of a diamond engraved in the hundreds of years of struggles.  The hundreds of years of fighting.  The hundreds of years of genocide.

            It is the impeccable raw design that the eye perceives, but with previous research, that gem, the size of a quarter and volume of a cube, remains untouched.

            The eye moves closer, and pulls out a magnifier .  It is dirty; a bit of dirt on it and chipped in locations.  Zales or even Waterford would kill for it, but the eye merely looks at it.

            It was worth probably around 25-30 grand, but the eye was not interested.  It was a blood diamond.

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  • nekkoli on May 27, 2009

    I like the comparison to that of a diamond, very descriptive wonderful write

  • swatilohani on Jun 4, 2009

    apt

  • Ruby Hawk on Jun 6, 2009

    Descriptive and enlighting. Way to go.

  • OhSugar on Jun 12, 2009

    Excellent piece. Eyes are the windows to our souls. We would not feel the way we do about so many things if we did not first see them.

  • seashell66 on Jun 22, 2009

    I enjoyed this…layers of meaning here.

  • Debra. on Jul 1, 2009

    You are a wonderful and very descriptive writer. It was such a profound piece with the added history of Africa! Brilliant!

  • sheba on Jul 11, 2009

    Very intersting! Thanks for sharing!

  • Poetic Enigma on Jul 12, 2009

    What a wonderful poem,
    very interesting perspective!

  • Dee Gold on Jul 17, 2009

    well-written

  • Katie Marie on Jul 26, 2009

    Excellent piece. Loved your finish with the eye seeing beyond the material to the cost, that of blood.

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