A Whine Poem

Daisy Peasblossom on Jul 8, 2009

Tags: boredom, loneliness, Poetry, pout, protest, whining

Waiter, I’ll take a little Whine with that.

Not much brain
Inside my head
I think I’m alive
But I feel kind of dead
I’m sleepy and tired
But don’t want to go to bed–
So I think I’ll write
A whine poem.

Oughta be something fun
Around here to do
Something better than staring
At my old left shoe
Where my ankle has swollen
Up kinda fat
Might be age but
Let’s not think of that
So I think I’ll write
A whine poem.

I’ve had a long time
To learn to whine;
I can do it better
Than I can dine.
And speaking of dining,
Dinner was sadly flat
More than a little lonely
For the matter of that.
I’m tired, I’m bored,
I lost my hat;
So I’ll just write
A whine poem.

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PR Mace on Jul 8, 2009
Have some cheese with your whine, elevate your swollen ankle and go to bed. That is where I am off to, to sleep prechance to dream. Read you later, Daisy.

Good night, my friend, Pam
George W Whitehead on Jul 9, 2009
Great fun. ‘Grandma’s Contemplating Her Left Shoe, Blues’. The best lyrics I’ve read in a long time, Daisy.
Ramalingam on Jul 9, 2009
Nice idea of writing a whine poem by a grandma.Why not? Thanks for sharing.
ken bultman on Jul 9, 2009
Poor baby, maybe needs a little sip from the whine cellar.
BeatsMe on Jul 9, 2009
Stop whining and write more poems.
Atanacio on Jul 9, 2009
whine? oh heck I thought you were going to write about wine..LOL good job
California Dreamer on Jul 9, 2009
Nice poem, I know the feeling, we shall whine and dine together sometime.
Lorelie Libetario on Jul 9, 2009
You did a good job at creating a whining persona here!
ajmera on Jul 9, 2009
Great job dear..
Ruby Hawk on Jul 9, 2009
LOL, Daisy I like your whine poem. It’s exactly how I feel at times.A good way to get it out of your system.
irishpen on Jul 10, 2009
This is so cool!

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