Feeling hopeless about a situation that you want to work out, but don’t know how to achieve it.

A whirlwind of emotions engulf me.

Does he or doesn’t he?

I doubt because I cannot touch

the one I love so very much.

Insecurity has left me feeling cold.

I need to feel him big and bold.

I am unable to get you out of my head.

I feel I shall die if I can’t share your bed.

What must one do with such turmoil,

look for some bunnies to boil?

My feelings for you are true,

but what good are they as there is nothing I can do?

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  • jimbob1 on Sep 30, 2010

    DB…what a power pledge of affection for someone with whom you share a very special and deep feeling…heads and hearts in a spinning whirlwind which also seems to whip up a myriad of emotions…I voted that I like it…like it very much…in fact I love it, but can’t vote that way…thank you…

  • jimbob1 on Sep 30, 2010

    DB…what a power pledge of affection for someone with whom you share a very special and deep feeling…heads and hearts in a spinning whirlwind which also seems to whip up a myriad of emotions…I voted that I like it…like it very much…in fact I love it, but can\’t vote that way…thank you…

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