A Winters Tale 2

yes me on Nov 27, 2010

Tags: poem, snow, story, Tale, thread, Yarn

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A wee run for a night by the fire… aye wi flickerin flames tae.

Winters Vail that frosted crunching snow

Step by step a trail that leads into the night

Is all the more the reason for his flight

Loud crunching steps yes louder than his own

Upon hearing such noise and at a pace

My fear it was that win the race

Ears were pricking as the pace it quick… end

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Comments (10)

Joie Schmidt on Nov 27, 2010
Suspenseful & intriguing!

Blessings.

Sincerely,

-Joie Schmidt.
s j tubrazy on Nov 27, 2010
`it is same like after apple picking , nice
Jimmy Shilaho on Nov 27, 2010
Another nice one, love your wee runs.
Ruby Hawk on Nov 27, 2010
I like it. eerie and supernatural.
Kaye TM on Nov 27, 2010
excellent share!
PSingh1990 on Nov 27, 2010
Nice Share.
Sail338 on Nov 27, 2010
Nice Share
Anj M on Nov 28, 2010
Nice
Phoenix Montoya on Nov 29, 2010
Sounds like really cold. Enjoyed the read, Matt.
LCM Linda on Nov 29, 2010
Interesting poem. Nice share.

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