Rising up, out from nowhere

breaking ground and bursting out

twisted movements

of volatile despair

driven by the need to scold

to suck from you

the very air from your blackened lungs

leaving you a deflated wreck

he mocks with his pointed finger

the demon of your past

abomination driven out of your fears

in every dreamy sigh of breath

he lingers, skin shedding

in layers on the railings

plodding on inside your head

bloodied deviant clot

a malfunction of your disturbed life

following you in the sewer shadows

in the shallow showers of judgement day

he bleeds his heavy burdens

upon your shoulders

beating and breaking showing no remorse

he groans in delight

in sickened abused pleasure

sealing the deed

stealing the very essence of your youth

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  • sara20 on May 17, 2010

    Nice to read this piece.

    Keep writing more about it. It is really gracefully and very well written skill.

    Thanks for sharing.

    Cheers.

    Sara:

  • flame007 on May 18, 2010

    very good piece

  • Jimmy Shilaho on May 18, 2010

    Another good piece but very dark all the same.

  • rajaryanme on May 18, 2010

    A nice poem

  • Atanacio on May 18, 2010

    Damn this was good

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