A personal story of friendship.

Yes this is personal and yes it is true.
It is my experience that I am sharing with you.
We were so close like sisters people said.
Closer than that we were, it was over your head.
A bond that sparked instantaneously much like new romance.
Of course those that insinuated such did not follow the dance.
Give give, take take, it all seemed so equal at first.
No shadow of doubt, we would never be cursed.
Hours and days were spent sharing the past.
The laughter and tears were flowing and vast.
Each told of old sorrows and pain we “had endured.
Consoling each other, we were each others cure.
We had found one another, knew it was different this time.
The ying to her yang, the partner to our crime.
We turned heads and made people wonder.
Quite a few tried to quiet the thunder.
This gave us our strength, like forces of nature together.
She and I against the world, no storm we couldn”t weather.
Life would charge in and test our power.
Tempted and taunted to see who would cower.
We prevailed time after time, year after year.
We drew lines for others that were perfectly clear.
Then one day it happened, the first of the clues.
A weakness exposed and a hint of a ruse.
“Not us I thought, this was not our path.
Rips in the fabric, hidden agendas, you do the math.
And with just as much power as we united.
Truth had snuck in though reluctant and uninvited.
The face I began to recognize was that of a stranger.
I saw it clearly and knew of the danger.
I had heard the voice before and I remember I shuddered.
Those combative words thrust at me she had finally uttered.
The loss was tremendous the grief devastating.
I now understood the line between loving and hating.
I missed her so, wishing for a branch or simply a leaf.
Yet not until I let her go was their any relief.
Why today of all days to write this for all to see?
Perhaps, maybe it means I can at last be free.

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  • alanlee67 on Feb 19, 2008

    Beautiful stuff.

  • timbury on Feb 19, 2008

    Someday I\’ll sit down with you and get the whole story. I love how you open yourself up in your writing. Thanks, V.

  • Christopher (moltensproket) on Feb 20, 2008

    Heart wrenching. I hope the writing of it was a catharsis. You convey emotion wonderfully.

  • Romi on Feb 20, 2008

    What a beautiful poem…I was completely drawn in, and sad at how it unfolded in the end. Thanks for sharing! :-)

  • whoeverelse? on Feb 17, 2009

    Whoeverelse is writing this?

    to tell you
    you are im-port-ant

    to know, beyond you
    you all inside you

    whoeverelse writes to you
    cause you are touching
    before you even start smiling

    (and you smile very often)

    whoeverelse writes to you
    to let you remember
    you are deeply appreciated
    and remembered
    with love and caring devotion

    in a moment when the craziest happiness visits us
    I come to share my joy of breathing
    the same air you do

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