What must it be to lie in your grave with someone dearest to your heart left behind? Explore the lonely feeling of the dead missing the beloved.

“Above My Grave”

 

Above my grave is an enchanting garden

Where a lonely breeze idly cools and tiptoes unforbidden;

Where an unmarked cross that’s mine bids the passerby

To honor my bones with a prayerful sigh.

 

There are rosebuds genuflecting in prayer to the sun,

Thanking Apollo  for their love light and perfume when day is done;

Each day new roses start to blush and bloom,

Touched by the summer glow,  unmindful of their  doom.

 

Sweet  Roses:

Kiss my Love for me with your fragrance

Like the air that wafts the daisy with its vibrance;

Tell her that on earth there’s no happier place

Than the grave with me in my cold embrace.###

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  • Judy Sheldon on Jul 31, 2011

    Very pretty but somewhat morose.

  • Martin Kloess on Aug 1, 2011

    Good Work.

  • neopisiva on Aug 1, 2011

    Wow, this is so dark, and yet powerful at the same time. You have a way with words.

  • Ruby Hawk on Aug 1, 2011

    Well done,

  • Likha on Aug 2, 2011

    Well-expressed. Gives me the goosebumps.

  • beingwell on Aug 2, 2011

    Nice one. Very deep.

  • Francois Hagnere on Aug 5, 2011

    Magnificent poem that brought tears to my eyes. Thank you for this beauty!

  • MJ Sunderland on Aug 5, 2011

    A very moving piece, thanks for posting.

  • Belle Pierdon on Aug 5, 2011

    I like this, it’s deep and has great meaning. Thank you for sharing this. :)

  • Dennis N OBrien on Aug 7, 2011

    Well written poetry.

  • Socorro Lawas on Aug 25, 2011

    I had the goosebumps myself when I wrote the poem, and I also cried.

  • Socorro Lawas on Sep 21, 2011

    Death is the end of dreams. No more dreams for the dead.

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