Love lost.

is silence your gift

is absence your warm embrace

lovingly distant

protection in your coldness

 

wounding me may not have been your motive

yet you knew your decision would inflict pain;

ultimately it succeeded

 

was your resentment so deep

did bitterness consume you

did you burn, were you justified

why seduce

why embrace if only to punish

wounded, you invited me near

 

devotion and faithfulness, where were you

was I blind to your surrender

 

without pride

pleading until exhausted

when we’re you mine

 

did you stand at my opened door

pause and turned away

 

mercy in your silence

in your absence, punishing no more

 

 

Es el silencio tu regalo

 Es ausencia tu calido abrazo

Amorosamente distante

Protección en tu frialdad

 

Herirme no pudiera haber sido tu motivo

Aunque tu sabias que tu decisión causaría dolor

Últimamente  este triunfo

 

Fue tu resentimiento muy hondo

La amargura te consumió

Te quemaste, fuiste justificado

Porque seducir

Porque aceptarlo si solo castiga

Herido, me invitaste cerca

 

Devoción y fidelidad, donde estaban

Estuve ciego a tu  rendición

 

Sin orgullo

Rogando hasta cansarme

Cuando fuiste mía

 

Te quedaste frente a mi puerta abierta

Pausaste y te volviste

 

Piedad es tu silencio

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Comments (12)
  • K.D. Storm on May 26, 2010

    WOW!!!!! That was awesome! I am very moved by this piece as well as able to relate to it. Great post.

  • Christine Ramsay on May 26, 2010

    It is always so difficult to cope with lost love. You have expressed yourself so well in this piece.

    Christine

  • Tom Woodside on May 27, 2010

    good poem! the question of wether he/she ment to is always relevant. love hurts. thank you

  • Emma Green on May 28, 2010

    Wow what an awesome write, I very much enjoyed it!

  • Joie Schmidt on May 28, 2010

    Beautiful* – - filled with passion and the risk we take with loving someone.

    Blessings.

    Sincerely,

    -Joie Schmidt.

  • zoeyclark on Jun 2, 2010

    I love both versions. Depressing but impressive and effective.

  • Lady Sunshine on Jun 5, 2010

    Lovely…yet full of sorrow. A moving piece.

  • serowa on Jun 6, 2010

    Interesting, made me pause to think. Great way of narrating your thoughts

  • V rank on Jun 7, 2010

    you really are so goo in this genre.. keep it up!

  • patofgold23 on Jun 7, 2010

    great post!!!!!! will check out the rest!

  • sasuke191 on Jun 10, 2010

    This is some really nice poetry!.. Actually looks like you have penned down your true feelings.. Nice work.. ^^

  • LoveDoctor on Jun 25, 2010

    This is beautiful and I am here again.

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