A French Sonnet written a day before the funeral of my dear cousin, who committed suicide.

Absent Glow

    Now, my friend, my cousin, you are gone;
your being fades, like twilight mirrored on
the ocean of our tears, like light upon
the shroud of sunset when its last had shone.

    Now, my friend, our night is setting slow—
it closes on us like your coffin’s woe
as we begin lamenting at its toe
for you, regretting now your absent glow.

    Now, the night is dark without you near;
though mourning is the only owl we hear—

we fear your spirit fades away as well
as slowly as your memory from the heart.
And while the dawn approaches, who can tell?
Though you have left us, hope will not depart.

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  • lhoney on Apr 23, 2009

    Oh,.. that’s so sad, I hope you’re okay. By the way this is a really wonderful poem, … I didn’t even know there was a thing called French Sonnet. Thanks and many blessings on you and your family. We feel for your loss.

  • Kate Smedley on Apr 23, 2009

    That’s so beautiful and so sad, I am so sorry for your awful loss, what a moving tribute.

  • Scout on Apr 23, 2009

    That is a very important beautiful sonnet, may I in words share with you in the passing of your cousin in such unfortunate circumstances. May god rest his soul and his spirit live forever in your heart.

  • John McDonnell on May 1, 2009

    Beautiful poem, with such a deposit of emotion in it. I’m not sure I understand “lamenting at its toe”, but the rest of it is very touching.

  • Stick on May 2, 2009

    Hi, John. Lamenting at the toe of the coffin. ‘Its’ refers to the object mentioned beforehand. Thanks.

  • Morgana on May 20, 2009

    That’s the way I feel about a loved one who left us too. I agree with the above comment, it is a beautiful poem.

  • Jenny Heart on Jun 4, 2009

    This is what poetry is all about. It’s about telling the truth even if it hurts, and telling it well. Great flowing emotions.

  • Katie Marie on Aug 5, 2009

    A very well written tribute for your cousin.

  • Anita Treso on Mar 17, 2010

    A nice tribute to your cousin.

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