Many women have fallen victim to men who have exploited them in some form or another. Only these poor women have fallen prey to abusers who like to master there control over them. Because these sort of men are too weak to face the real world. I am sending a message to women and telling them don’t be a victim to these ill abusers.

Those who encounter ignorance
Shall be consumed
By its unflavoured tongue
An exhibitionist who imposes
With forceful words
That should come unheard
Only women are driven
By this insistant call
Empathizes a vigorous ill abuser
Know that he will always be the loser
Consistanly unstabulizing the situation
Drawing you into a fixation
Drains the very essence of you
Your state of mind cannot undo
When he has control over who you are
Know with this
You cannot have your good wish
As he will continue
To serve you an unflavoured dish!

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  • Joe Dorish on Feb 15, 2009

    Abusers always have low self esteem which is why they abuse. I have always felt that schools should teach classes to girls and women to help them avoid such people. What’s more important – learning how far the sun is from the Earth or learning the tell-tale markers of someone who is going to abuse you possibly for the rest of your life?

  • K Kristie on Feb 15, 2009

    I’m with you on this cause. Great post!

  • cardy on Feb 15, 2009

    Nice work I agree with you.

  • Tusaani on Feb 15, 2009

    I totally agree of course : )

  • Emma J Kerry on Feb 15, 2009

    Really well written. I agree with you 100% here.

  • Debra. on Feb 15, 2009

    Excellent words and very well expressed.

    God bless.

  • Moron Savant on Feb 15, 2009

    great post…
    yup, there should be a clear dividing line between falling in love and letting oneself be abused…

  • Darla Smith on Feb 15, 2009

    Very nicely written and so very true.

  • papaleng on Feb 15, 2009

    Count me in on this crusade. These abusers doesn’t fear the Lord.

  • Joni Keith on Feb 15, 2009

    I was just thinking of this very topic. You did an excellent job speaking out for the victims. As a survivor, I thank you.

  • Poertyqueen on Feb 15, 2009

    I agree with you on this. Great job!

  • Lee Altman on Feb 15, 2009

    Total agreement . great work

  • rutherfranc on Feb 15, 2009

    so true! I`m with you in this march..

  • QuinMonty86 on Feb 15, 2009

    Good job. You know I stand with you on this crusade. We survivor’s must speak out and help those still trapped.

  • Aldrin A Wilding West on Feb 15, 2009

    If only more of us who have been abused could stand up and speak out. The world would be a much better place, but alas the majority don’t because the abuser has sadly achieved their goal.

  • S Air on Feb 15, 2009

    A sad reality for many women.

  • Blade619 on Feb 15, 2009

    I can not men abusing women or the other way around. The one of my closest friends took a sever assault both mentally and physically from his girlfriend, he never spoke out because he was afraid people would mock him. In the end he got out of that relationship, but he’s never been able to form a stong bond with a woman since. He loved he blindly and would have followed her to the end of existance, but apparently she didn’t feel the same.

  • David Cartier on Feb 15, 2009

    this is very powerful and was done well thank you

  • MMV Abad on Feb 15, 2009

    A sad reality for most women, indeed. My aunt has this case. They are in the court now. Nice poem :)

  • Likha on Feb 16, 2009

    Thanks for standing up for the cause of women and the rest who suffer from abuse of any form. If I may borrow a TV ad line, “Stop the abuse. Draw the line.”

  • George W Whitehead on Feb 16, 2009

    Very true, suzan.

  • Pete Macinta on Feb 16, 2009

    Good points!

  • S A JOHNSON on Feb 17, 2009

    Great poem.

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