Addicted to Your Love

Darla Cooke on Jun 21, 2009

Tags: couple, kisses, love, lovers, passion, romance

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Love poem.

Image via Wikipedia

You have weakened my resolve.

I’ve fallen madly in love with you.

You bring excitement to my life.

I feel anxious with anticipation,

craving the thrill of your tender kiss.

I am powerless against your charm.

I can’t avoid your unbridled passion.

Since you reappeared in my life,

I’ve become addicted to your love.

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Comments (13)

goodselfme on Jun 21, 2009
Well done with great imagery.
Deep Blue on Jun 21, 2009
Nice lines.
clay hurtubise on Jun 21, 2009
Good job.
Thanks,
Clay
scout on Jun 21, 2009
HI DARLA, BACK AFTER A BREAK AND CATCHING UP ON THINGS.LOVELY WORK WITH GREAT IMAGERY AS EVER.
Francy on Jun 21, 2009
well written
rajeev bhargava on Jun 21, 2009
a really intense and passionate poem, beautifully worded. i liked it alot. the painting is lovely too.
StumbleUponWriter on Jun 21, 2009
perfect for someone in love..
irishpen on Jun 22, 2009
This is wonderful Darla! And I think the painting is simply PERFECT with the poem—(one of my favorites, too!)

~peace~&~blessings~
pinkrose88 on Jun 22, 2009
The treatment/tone of your poem fits the image.

Keep it up!
kate smedley on Jun 22, 2009
Lovely poem … I think we’ve all been there.
STEVE666 on Jun 22, 2009
Succumbing to temptation, Darla?
Jacob on Jun 22, 2009
Simply amazing, perfect picture to go with a prefect poem. =]
CutestPrincess on Jul 7, 2009
Very lovely and touching. I liked this one a lot.

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