A poem about addiction and letting it win.


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Addiction
Sucking the life out of me
Leaving me breathless
Calling my name in sheer silence
Screaming so loudly,
but no one can hear
Eating me from the inside out
Taking over completely
Leaving me numb
To this emptiness I succumb
Now there is no where left to run
It is over,
Addiction Won

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  • Peter Cimino on Sep 10, 2010

    YIKES! Painful and scary. Well done.

  • Ethics0006 on Sep 10, 2010

    Don’t lose, Try to fight. You will definitely won

  • Christine Ramsay on Sep 11, 2010

    Gosh! This can happen so easily. You put the feelings over well.

    Christine

  • STEVE666 on Sep 14, 2010

    Harrowing, yet brilliantly written and expressed, PE.

    Hope it’s not written from a personal perspective.

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