Adieu to a Star

duck01 on Jan 17, 2012

Tags: Christmas, star

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Poem bidding an end to the Christmas season.

Image by paparutzi via Flickr

ADIEU TO A STAR

O ruby star flare! Dim not your gaze

when the glad tree is shorn of grace

and doves part wings all fair with hay

in a drear barn that bore our salve.

O fire tip dart to pluck my soul

if rust eats holes so new love cries.

I pine for bliss; come melt this life

and let me waltz with your fond kin.

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girishpuri on Jan 17, 2012
great
prsol46 on Jan 17, 2012
Very nice piece of work!
sanataryal on Jan 17, 2012
Duck , preety poem . Nice creativity with beautiful picture .
Margaret Boseroy on Jan 17, 2012
I love your poetry. Not a lot of people can write this well. More please…
Vivek Ratan on Jan 18, 2012
excellent poem,Duck
Audrey Howitt on Jan 20, 2012
There is something timeless about this piece–just gorgeous writing!
girishpuri on Jan 21, 2012
i like it
somiasom on Jan 21, 2012
Good post. Thanks for share. i liked it
J L Carey Jr on Feb 6, 2012
awesome
Vinaya says good bye on Feb 28, 2012
I loved the uniform rhythm in the poetry.

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