Admiration by Reverie

ken bultman on Jun 19, 2009

Tags: babies, book, church, Eyes, field, flowers, Puppy, tree, vision

Dedicated to those who have in some way impacted the life of another.

I can see her now…
She’s walking through a field of pretty flowers
Or sitting ‘neath a chestnut tree for hours.
I close my eyes and I can see her now.

I can see her now…
She’s coming home from church on Sunday morning;
She’s waking up refreshed on Monday morning
I close my eyes and I can see her now.

I can see her now…
She reads a book and loves the smell of pages;
Loves puppy breath and babies of all ages.
I close my eyes and I can see her now.

I can see her now…
If only she were real and not a vision
I could easily make a firm decision
To open my eyes so I could see her now.

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Christine Ramsay on Jun 19, 2009
She sounds very special. nice work.

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Deep Blue on Jun 19, 2009
Great vision expressed in detailed lines of poetry.
Darla Cooke on Jun 19, 2009
Beautifully written!
Hugo La Rosa on Jun 19, 2009
Great poem!
Kate Smedley on Jun 19, 2009
I really like this, it’s so touching!! I hope she’s near you soon.
Sky Lumina on Jun 19, 2009
awww this really moved me.
goodselfme on Jun 19, 2009
Great imagery with a nice flow too.
Sheila M on Jun 19, 2009
Trying not to cry this was so beautiful=)
Tanya Wallace on Jun 19, 2009
I believe I now have a favorite of your works of poetry.You created such vividness and imagery in your wording.Inspirational,heartfelt and wonderfully creative.Brilliant work Ken.
Cynthia Bartlett on Jun 19, 2009
I have one similar to this that I’ve posted. Wait. Did I post it? Yes I did. It’s called “Standing There” come by and read it. Great minds think alike.
Smiter on Jun 20, 2009
The most serious piece I have read so far of yours. Beautifully written.
Daisy Peasblossom on Jun 20, 2009
Wow. That’s quite a change of pace. Beautiful.
Marie Milton on Jul 25, 2009
beautifully written…: )
BradONeill on Jul 25, 2009
Beautiful my friend, I am sure your vision smiled when she read this.
cafftee on Jul 25, 2009
Oh this is beautiful, your admiration so simply expressed but to great effect.
Alina Beck on Jul 25, 2009
Such beautiful and delicate writing. I loved it.
maranatha on Jul 26, 2009
You must miss her so. Lovely work.
goodselfme on Jul 26, 2009
This flows so well and is very gently composed for complete enjoyment. Well done!
I Have Had Enough on Jul 27, 2009
Very sincere dedication.
shelly barclay on Jul 27, 2009
Very sweet poem.
Katie Marie on Jul 30, 2009
Well done! Made me feel your heart.

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