Tit for tat…………………..

Assassin,bandits and foes of mine,

warning of grudge to you and your allies.

I’m anneal by friend who is coaching and polishing me about all rights and wrongs.

My rainy days are over and it’s time for you to pay.

Although, I’m sliced and scattered but standing in this battlefield of love

and I’ll win this war then I’ll be there any moment for avenging.

You were  guardian and an angel I was told but in real, a demon

and by this you sprinkled dust in my eyes,

and you played game of fiddle with me

like I was born yesterday,wounded my emotions.

plundered my body,furnished me with pangs of pain and necklace of sorrows.

Penalized me from as sun peeped, till little twinkle stars started to play.

Don’t waste your time in regretting and begging,

search your way to escape

either hide yourself in grave or hell,in depth of sea

or between the grove of trees,

in thick of nights and days or behind your shadow,

under the cascade or in any part of this world.

If you are not gratified with this all dial yourself towards

Jupiter,Mars or Moon but remember by burning mid night oil I’ll attain you soon.

Then I’ll not show mercy even on your kith and kins,

who are not prosper to be punished.

I’ll burn your valleys of love,I’ll be contention between your league,

I’ll crash your strength and torment you when you will be weak,

and that day will be red letter day for me

when “Gloomy” word will be abolished from my name.

My grieve and sombre face will turn into,

wicked and jubilant smile for my victory for sure.


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  • CHIPMUNK on Oct 24, 2011

    such lovely pic well expressed

  • bojtobolu23 on Oct 24, 2011

    amazing pic :)

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Oct 24, 2011

    I loved the pictures and I also loved the poem, it is great!

  • ImKarn23 on Oct 24, 2011

    so sad, gloomy..

  • AINIEE on Oct 24, 2011

    nice one:)

  • juny423 on Oct 24, 2011

    you always expressed with good thoughts and well associated with photos :)

  • marqjonz on Oct 24, 2011

    So you’re morose and out for blood. Great poem.

  • megamatt09 on Oct 24, 2011

    Great work.

  • Profit Buzz on Oct 24, 2011

    remind me not to cross your path. I am sorry!

  • AmateurWriter on Oct 24, 2011


  • tonywriter on Oct 24, 2011

    LOLzz @ Profit Buzz……..lovely pics and good sharing

  • treesaro on Oct 24, 2011

    very very good

  • binyumanyun on Oct 24, 2011

    Nice share..

  • erwinkennythomas on Oct 24, 2011

    angry and upset with terrific pictures with sayings!

  • vardhanh71 on Oct 24, 2011

    Awesome share……..

  • VoIP on Oct 24, 2011

    ‘I’ll burn your valleys of love,I’ll be contention between your league,”

    U write light years beyond your age.

    Good luck with the burning. May it meet your expectations.

  • athena goodlight on Oct 24, 2011

    nice poem. Well expressed.

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 24, 2011

    Living in a fantasy!

  • Martin Kloess on Oct 25, 2011

    very good.

  • nurzaira on Oct 25, 2011

    hemm poetry that pours anger..

  • FX777222999 on Oct 25, 2011

    Gloomy to the max with revenge.

  • Aroosa Hermosa on Oct 25, 2011

    Hey frnds u all r concerned about my foes that how much angry I am and crazy for revenge and showing constant enmity but don’t u see what they did to me.read carefully!!!

  • ittech on Oct 25, 2011

    my rainy days are over and now it is time tom pay nice write up thanks

  • Prakash Vaghela on Oct 26, 2011

    nice sharing

  • AmateurWriter on Oct 26, 2011

    i love it

  • Jonas N on Oct 26, 2011

    u enjoy the pictures dont u? Adding some life to your writing. nice one friend.

  • mdrkarim7 on Oct 27, 2011

    Nice shot!

  • Muzammil196 on Oct 27, 2011

    An excellent piece of poetry. In real sense an appreciable content and the way you wrote it.

  • girishpuri on Oct 27, 2011

    yeah your anger is genuine , well written

  • DanielD on Oct 27, 2011

    Dear, I felt the anger, felt the tension, wanna feel you!

  • AmateurWriter on Oct 27, 2011

    nice nice nice

  • vijayanths on Oct 27, 2011

    good one.

  • shubhamkumar on Oct 27, 2011

    great work

  • Andrew Handley on Oct 27, 2011

    great poem as always

  • Elle64 on Oct 27, 2011

    you express yourself so well

  • ittech on Oct 27, 2011

    reached here second time nice thanks

  • Joe Ram on Oct 27, 2011

    Great one.

  • tonyleather on Oct 28, 2011

    Pretty surreal, I think, but quite interesting.

  • tiffi on Oct 28, 2011

    Very well writtten~!

  • straw1979 on Oct 29, 2011

    very great poem like always

  • misterdd on Oct 29, 2011

    When it’s hard, try to be happy. The best way to go on, is with people who deserve that. Dont spend your time on people who dont deserve that. But i understand

  • nurzaira on Oct 29, 2011

    i am here again

  • jennifer eiffel01 on Oct 30, 2011

    Quite good and wonderful pictures.

  • holly the chef on Oct 30, 2011

    Great! Well written and nice pics

  • Eliza26 on Oct 31, 2011


  • jad farid on Nov 1, 2011

    Great work! great pics!

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  • thetoplad on Nov 3, 2011

    very well done

  • imankbj on Nov 4, 2011

    i like pic, it’s good :)

  • imankbj on Nov 4, 2011

    i like pic, it\’s good :)

  • realityspeaks on Nov 11, 2011

    Good work

  • holdkunal on Nov 12, 2011

    you have great collection of hear touching pictures.

  • beingwell on Nov 21, 2011

    Good writing.

  • socialbookstatus on Nov 23, 2011

    Nice piece and the photo is very effective and helps the piece.

  • sjindal1121 on Nov 30, 2011

    awesum share….

  • Vinaya says good bye on Jan 30, 2012

    Your words and pictures are amazing.

  • dodolbete on Mar 25, 2012

    Go win the war princess, that what it takes to be a queen… very cool ^_^

  • VV on Mar 29, 2012

    LO VE LY

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