Admonish to My Foes

Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 24, 2011

Tags: abolish, allies, attain, burn, Escape, foes, grudge, hide, I'm coming, kill you, revenge, run, time to pay, warning

Tit for tat…………………..

Assassin,bandits and foes of mine,

warning of grudge to you and your allies.

I’m anneal by friend who is coaching and polishing me about all rights and wrongs.

My rainy days are over and it’s time for you to pay.

Although, I’m sliced and scattered but standing in this battlefield of love

and I’ll win this war then I’ll be there any moment for avenging.

You were guardian and an angel I was told but in real, a demon

and by this you sprinkled dust in my eyes,

and you played game of fiddle with me

like I was born yesterday,wounded my emotions.

plundered my body,furnished me with pangs of pain and necklace of sorrows.

Penalized me from as sun peeped, till little twinkle stars started to play.

Don’t waste your time in regretting and begging,

search your way to escape

either hide yourself in grave or hell,in depth of sea

or between the grove of trees,

in thick of nights and days or behind your shadow,

under the cascade or in any part of this world.

If you are not gratified with this all dial yourself towards

Jupiter,Mars or Moon but remember by burning mid night oil I’ll attain you soon.

Then I’ll not show mercy even on your kith and kins,

who are not prosper to be punished.

I’ll burn your valleys of love,I’ll be contention between your league,

I’ll crash your strength and torment you when you will be weak,

and that day will be red letter day for me

when “Gloomy” word will be abolished from my name.

My grieve and sombre face will turn into,

wicked and jubilant smile for my victory for sure.

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CHIPMUNK on Oct 24, 2011
such lovely pic well expressed
bojtobolu23 on Oct 24, 2011
amazing pic
jennifer eiffel01 on Oct 24, 2011
I loved the pictures and I also loved the poem, it is great!
ImKarn23 on Oct 24, 2011
so sad, gloomy..
AINIEE on Oct 24, 2011
nice one:)
juny423 on Oct 24, 2011
you always expressed with good thoughts and well associated with photos
marqjonz on Oct 24, 2011
So you’re morose and out for blood. Great poem.
megamatt09 on Oct 24, 2011
Great work.
Profit Buzz on Oct 24, 2011
remind me not to cross your path. I am sorry!
AmateurWriter on Oct 24, 2011
NICEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
tonywriter on Oct 24, 2011
LOLzz @ Profit Buzz……..lovely pics and good sharing
treesaro on Oct 24, 2011
very very good
binyumanyun on Oct 24, 2011
Nice share..
erwinkennythomas on Oct 24, 2011
angry and upset with terrific pictures with sayings!
vardhanh71 on Oct 24, 2011
Awesome share……..
VoIP on Oct 24, 2011
‘I’ll burn your valleys of love,I’ll be contention between your league,”

U write light years beyond your age.

Good luck with the burning. May it meet your expectations.
athena goodlight on Oct 24, 2011
nice poem. Well expressed.
mdrkarim7 on Oct 24, 2011
Living in a fantasy!
Martin Kloess on Oct 25, 2011
very good.
nurzaira on Oct 25, 2011
hemm poetry that pours anger..
FX777222999 on Oct 25, 2011
Gloomy to the max with revenge.
Aroosa Gloomy on Oct 25, 2011
Hey frnds u all r concerned about my foes that how much angry I am and crazy for revenge and showing constant enmity but don’t u see what they did to me.read carefully!!!
ittech on Oct 25, 2011
my rainy days are over and now it is time tom pay nice write up thanks
Prakash Vaghela on Oct 26, 2011
nice sharing
AmateurWriter on Oct 26, 2011
i love it
Jonas N on Oct 26, 2011
u enjoy the pictures dont u? Adding some life to your writing. nice one friend.
mdrkarim7 on Oct 27, 2011
Nice shot!
Muzammil196 on Oct 27, 2011
An excellent piece of poetry. In real sense an appreciable content and the way you wrote it.
girishpuri on Oct 27, 2011
yeah your anger is genuine , well written
DanielD on Oct 27, 2011
Dear, I felt the anger, felt the tension, wanna feel you!
AmateurWriter on Oct 27, 2011
nice nice nice
vijayanths on Oct 27, 2011
good one.
shubhamkumar on Oct 27, 2011
great work
Andrew Handley on Oct 27, 2011
great poem as always
Elle64 on Oct 27, 2011
you express yourself so well
ittech on Oct 27, 2011
reached here second time nice thanks
Joe Ram on Oct 27, 2011
Great one.
tonyleather on Oct 28, 2011
Pretty surreal, I think, but quite interesting.
tiffi on Oct 28, 2011
Very well writtten~!
straw1979 on Oct 29, 2011
very great poem like always
misterdd on Oct 29, 2011
When it’s hard, try to be happy. The best way to go on, is with people who deserve that. Dont spend your time on people who dont deserve that. But i understand
nurzaira on Oct 29, 2011
i am here again
jennifer eiffel01 on Oct 30, 2011
Quite good and wonderful pictures.
holly the chef on Oct 30, 2011
Great! Well written and nice pics
Eliza26 on Oct 31, 2011
Fierce!
jad farid on Nov 1, 2011
Great work! great pics!
J L Carey Jr on Nov 2, 2011
&)
thetoplad on Nov 3, 2011
very well done
imankbj on Nov 4, 2011
i like pic, it’s good
imankbj on Nov 4, 2011
i like pic, it\’s good
realityspeaks on Nov 11, 2011
Good work
holdkunal on Nov 12, 2011
you have great collection of hear touching pictures.
beingwell on Nov 21, 2011
Good writing.
socialbookstatus on Nov 23, 2011
Nice piece and the photo is very effective and helps the piece.
sjindal1121 on Nov 30, 2011
awesum share….
Vinaya says good bye on Jan 30, 2012
Your words and pictures are amazing.
dodolbete on Mar 25, 2012
Go win the war princess, that what it takes to be a queen… very cool ^_^
VV on Mar 29, 2012
LO VE LY

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