Poetry about intimate love.


Two young bodies melt like the shadows merge

Excited like fanatics, this uncontrollable urge

Like the storm like the force like a mighty sun

Two bodies burn and dance in youthful fun

Unnoticed of the time uncared of the world

Love makes it own way straight and swirl

Two mortals act here in an adult’s play

Lips sealed with the lips nothing more to say

    Closer and closer with love holds the trust

And in the feelings of magic moments love tastes the lust.

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  • cleblanc on Jul 23, 2009

    hot!

  • Priyanka on Jul 24, 2009

    WOW! I have never read such a lovely HOT poem! Great job! :)

  • Theresa Johnson on Aug 19, 2009

    great job… very sensual piece

  • Kitty Starwizard on Sep 1, 2009

    well, i just don;t know about you young man….i still think going with me into space and traveling the formation of a nebula would be a thrill. great poem…Kitty

  • Mary Patricia Bird on Sep 9, 2009

    Beautiful!

  • LOVELYHONEY on Sep 21, 2009

    you are more lusty,

    than lovely h

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