An acrostic poem about love after dark.

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After dark when we’re alone together

Fierce yearning consumes our bodies

Tempting us with soft gentle caresses

Each stroke filled with urgent longing

Ready for a night of passionate thrills

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Darkness releases our inner wildness

Allowing full control of our passion

Re-igniting the smoldering embers

Keeping the flames of desire burning

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  • cardy on Mar 30, 2010

    A lovely write a sigh escapes me really enjoyed the read

  • ashan1614 on Mar 30, 2010

    I know what it’s like to be with someone you can’t keep your hands off of…. Well done!

  • Shamyl on Mar 30, 2010

    Another awesome poem.

  • Jay Knights on Mar 30, 2010

    I always desire when I read your work….very hot thoughts…until after dark…

  • Judi Eddy on Mar 30, 2010

    Very passionate. loved it. judi

  • Christine Ramsay on Mar 30, 2010

    A very expressive piece.

  • diamondpoet on Mar 30, 2010

    That was hot and erotic. good post.

  • Sourav on Mar 30, 2010

    Nice.
    Very exciting!

  • Geomorphosis on Mar 30, 2010

    Personally, this is one reason I love the dark but of course with someone. Good poem, Madame.

  • Westbrook on Mar 30, 2010

    In the dark is when it is most fun!

  • Starpisces on Mar 30, 2010

    nice poem..

  • lillyrose on Mar 30, 2010

    tantalising as normal!

  • Hepsi.M on Mar 30, 2010

    exciting poem,well-expressed

  • Goodselfme on Mar 30, 2010

    Wonderful

  • giftarist on Mar 30, 2010

    Passionate!

  • STEVE666 on Mar 30, 2010

    I think you are a bit of a night creature, Darla! Nice!

  • petercurtis97 on Mar 30, 2010

    The passion and mystique comes through in the persona,
    well done

  • RAJEEV BHARGAVA on Mar 30, 2010

    A really passionate poem written in a very natural flow and very well expressed. Brilliant work!

  • Temjen Imchen on Mar 31, 2010

    Another erotic poem. Nice one.

  • xoxo on Mar 31, 2010

    So passionate poem!

  • Brian Daniel Stankich on Mar 31, 2010

    the Queen of Passion strikes again

  • Melody SJAL on Mar 31, 2010

    So lovely.

  • XXElleXX on Apr 1, 2010

    Oooo … very sultry piece Darla … hehehe …love the pics too :-)

  • LOVELYHONEY on Apr 2, 2010

    EVERY DAY AFTER THE DARKNESSS

    I OBSERVE U AWAKE

    and eat ur cake and have it too

    another juicy and lovely poem from u

  • CA Johnson on Apr 2, 2010

    I loved your poem. It was really sensual and passionate.

  • Precious Illusions on Apr 3, 2010

    very sensual and sultry…

  • RS Wing on Apr 4, 2010

    An erotic and passionate piece with class. Great write.

  • fragile18 on Apr 28, 2010

    nice!

  • George Bek on Apr 8, 2011

    Clearly a very romantic and passionate woman. I like your work very much Darla, particularly that on romance, passion and love making. Well, that IS my area of preference…ha ha..! Thanks. George.

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