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After Eye Surgery

Val Mills on Oct 29, 2010
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Seeing things I could not have seen before.

Eyes open slowly.

4 pm clock winks at me,

knowing I can see.

by Val Mills, 30 October 2010

Have you read:

Until I See You Again

Do You Appreciate Your Eye Sight?

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  • drelayaraja on Oct 29, 2010

    All the best Val Mills…

  • Christine Ramsay on Oct 29, 2010

    A lovely haiku. I bet you are glad it is over.

    Christine

  • Roe2115 on Oct 29, 2010

    I wish you the best.

  • albert1jemi on Oct 29, 2010

    great share

  • Jimmy Shilaho on Oct 29, 2010

    This must be one of your shortest entries. Glad you are fine.

  • aleah on Oct 29, 2010

    get well soon!

  • LoveDoctor on Oct 29, 2010

    Great one!

  • Starpisces on Oct 29, 2010

    Yippee you are back, with this haiku poem, happy for you.
    Keep writing, Val.

    @_@

  • Michal Dorcak on Oct 29, 2010

    Wow, this is short. Anyway. I am happy you can see …

  • Raj the Tora on Oct 29, 2010

    Hey Val, please take rest. Leave alone your computer for a few days. or dictate the text if you have to type, so that someone else can help. I wish I were there to write your articles. Get well sooon.

  • Brenda Nelson on Oct 29, 2010

    The loss of eyesight would be a terrible thing.

    we all need to take care of our eyes, so lucky we live in a time when eye repairs can be done…

  • PR Mace on Oct 30, 2010

    Take care and you will being seeing fine soon.

  • Rehoboth on Oct 30, 2010

    $get well soon$

  • clandestinef on Oct 30, 2010

    Thanks for sharing this article. I love it so much.

  • yes me on Oct 30, 2010

    Take your time Val cheers

  • Dee Gold on Oct 30, 2010

    I am happy for you, friend.

  • Adrn0919 on Oct 30, 2010

    I celebrate with you. Thank you for sharing.

  • Shirley Shuler on Oct 30, 2010

    I am very happy for you, Val. It’s a blessing to be able to see, isn’t it wonderful!!

  • Lady Sunshine on Oct 31, 2010

    Succinct and clever piece. So glad the surgery went well, Val.

  • V rank on Oct 31, 2010

    Thank God…

  • Sharif Ishnin on Oct 31, 2010

    That’s great news Val. Welcome back.

  • J M Lennox on Oct 31, 2010

    I didn’t see this one until now. You were back sooner than expected. Wonderful.

  • Brewed Coffee on Nov 2, 2010

    Welcome back, Ms. Val! Good to see you!

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