There is something wonderfully calming about a large tree.

Stumbling through the tears and fears,
Falling into an old oak tree;
Rough the bark, straight the trunk,
A monument to stability.

A clinging hug of that rough bark
Not in worship, not in sentimentality;
But in acknowledgement of a fellow traveler
Traversing the road between birth and death.

Long has it stood here, before I was born.
Long shall it remain, barring fire or flood,
Hurricane or tornado, bugs, or other ills.
Does being alive convey selfhood?

If it could talk, what would it say
Of all the travelers who have passed this way.

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  • DA Cournean on May 28, 2009

    Very nice!

  • julianhw on May 28, 2009

    I agree – we have some amazing stand alone trees in my area (they are more noticeable than the same hidden in a wood) but there is something about an old gnarled Oak – nice to see that character, stability and timelessness recognized in your words.

  • swatilohani on May 29, 2009

    great sharring

  • Joe Dorish on May 29, 2009

    Nice Daisy.

  • Kate Smedley on May 29, 2009

    Lovely poem, old trees have so much history, so timeless.

  • PR Mace on May 29, 2009

    Nice words, Daisy. I know how you feel. That is why I still have three old large oaks in my backyard. Oh, and the like button is not working on this post.

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