This poem is a tribute to two legends of the Triond writing website, the recently late Most Popular Article and the stricken Mnofdichotomy. They worked together on the notorious Banksy project. Duff D Moss directed me to a website on spirituality which sparked off my story called Long Sleep, and now this.

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They say there is a world that stands beside our own.

We cannot see it ‘til we pass on through that wall

‘Tween Life and Death.

Once there we are restored to what we were

At twenty five.

All ills removed to leave us all in perfect health.

There is no hell nor heaven waiting there for us,

No punishment for sins committed through our lives.

Nor golden pavements flanking diamond streets

For those who have been “good”.

Yet call this Heaven if you will.

What’s in a name I have to ask.

Let’s call them Angels who live there.

They watch our struggles through this Earthly life.

On passing some will even go

To their own funeral.

It’s said this nether-world is made of spheres

One atop the other

Through which you rise as you “mature”

In a spiritual sense.

All Angels work together

Just learning what they can:

And growing to a higher plane.

All this is said,

By many round the world.

My Hope

Is that

They’re right.

Paul Butters

 

(C) PB 1582011 in Yorkshire

 

Source of inspiration Duff D Moss who directed me to:

http://www.victorzammit.com/book/4thedition/chapter29.html

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  • PaulB on Aug 15, 2011

    Am satisfied with this effort, though the actual stanzas have been lost. Am attempting a fix. Page became unavailable last time I tried.

  • ashan1614 on Aug 15, 2011

    Interesting concept of the afterlife….. something to think about.

  • joe russell on Aug 15, 2011

    interesting

  • Beth Stafford on Aug 30, 2011

    gave me cold chills. Awesome work.

  • dazzlejazz on Sep 3, 2011

    I like it. The novel I’m working on at the moment covers the mysteries of the afterlife. Certainly makes you think.

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