About being aggitated.

Aggravation all around,

Screaming because I want a way out.

Head is spinning round and round.

Feel like I’m falling upside down.

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  • ashan1614 on Aug 21, 2009

    Short and to the point. Aggravation gets the best of all of us at times.

  • Michael Degenhardt on Aug 21, 2009

    How I know that feeling all too often too, very well expressed. Michael

  • Judi Eddy on Aug 21, 2009

    Good words. just how I feel, I relate how I feel through the words I write in my poetry,

  • ladybaby on Aug 21, 2009

    Been there many times.

  • Ramalingam on Aug 21, 2009

    Why don’t you be calm for some time ?

  • Jenny Heart on Aug 21, 2009

    Very precise details on this emotion. Like it!

  • Uma Shankari on Aug 21, 2009

    Well expressed emotions.

  • ken bultman on Aug 21, 2009

    Some days are like that.

  • monica55 on Aug 24, 2009

    Aggravation is very well expressed. But don’t allow it to get the better of you. Continue to channel it into your writing.
    Monica.

  • Vikram Chhabra on Aug 28, 2009

    Very expressive!!

  • S A JOHNSON on Sep 1, 2009

    Loved it, very smooth and relate-able.

  • cutedrishti8 on Sep 10, 2009

    Nice one to share…great work…

  • WriteEditSeek on Sep 18, 2009

    I like the line “feel like I’m falling upside down”–that captures the difficult emotion very well.

  • spiritwalker on Sep 22, 2009

    just ignore it and it will go away

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