Flashing across the sky, leaving.

Can we pretend that airplanes in the night sky are shooting stars

Cos I could really use a wish right now,

wish right now,

wish right now.

Cos what I see now is a night sky.

It’s dark

Everything’s coming to an end

And there are no shooting stars

Not even stars.

Everything is bleak

I need a shooting star,

To make a wish.

But I see nothing but planes.

Can I pretend that they are the shooting stars

Can I, please

I want to.

But I can’t

The airplanes fly past me

Leaving me behind.

Forgotten.

Drifting away

Drifting far far away

I want a shooting star

I need a shooting star.

Just one, please just

one.

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Comments (7)
  • sunnyiam on Jun 19, 2010

    nice work friend ,keep writing

  • wonder on Jun 19, 2010

    A yearning, simply expressed.Liked it very much.

  • drelayaraja on Jun 20, 2010

    Wonderful ;)

  • yes me on Jun 20, 2010

    Next month, or August…. is the best T for meteor showers.
    cheers

  • Tulan on Jun 20, 2010

    I watch the meteor showers every August. They are amazing.

  • hollysoholly on Jun 22, 2010

    Well Done! Thanks for sharing such an amazing piece!

  • Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Jun 24, 2010

    You don’t have to wish if you learn how to pray and believe.

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