Alas!

Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 8, 2011

Tags: alas, alibi, broken, faith, fate, heartnomadic, love, macabre, memories, playing, soul, stick gum og love, still remember, wretch

Now, nothing left what is done is done.

I dig into past, clouds used to wrap around me for defending,

I still recall,stars used to play hide and seek beside me,

Recognising how fate followed me and all I heard were tunes of success.

Courageous and luck kissing my feet.

Now, in these days,I see myself falling apart.

My stray memories now put me back in prison of past,

which are barriers for me to move forward

and nibbling me like mouse.

I’m guilty for my unplanned sins that I committed but

fate is playing with me,

it never stretched it’s hand towards me for friendship,

when ever it meet,gives me tears as gift and my

wretchedness, my love stepped in my life when I’m all left with

My mingled breath,macabre broken heart,

Pricking voice,grieve eyes and nomadic soul likewise

I feel the fragnance of love but I don’t feel that way.

I’m not able to find stick gum of love to stick my crack heart,

I didn’t get tape of faith to mend internal valley of my heart.

Like a fear I’m melting all around,

Like a tear I’m dispersing under ground,

same like lies I’m fainting when truth is found,

How miserable life is,I have no reason to prove my memories wrong

and wash them clean and no alibi to prove me right

but still I have reason to live.

29
Liked it

I Like It

Comments (78)

jad farid on Nov 8, 2011
excellent content and awesome pictures! great work.
CHIPMUNK on Nov 8, 2011
Wow!! Such a lovely poem with awesome pictures
Elle64 on Nov 8, 2011
Very good- I like the pictures too
misterdd on Nov 8, 2011
Life is better when people are optimistic, so be optimistic
binyumanyun on Nov 8, 2011
Nice and Great Share..
aisha jamal on Nov 8, 2011
arsi verrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrryyyyyyyy well written! i just loved it !
FX777222999 on Nov 8, 2011
Awesome poem to read.
ittech on Nov 8, 2011
by bad luck nice one
18infomedia on Nov 8, 2011
Excellent Written Poem with nice Picture. I like it.
Martin Kloess on Nov 8, 2011
very good
marqjonz on Nov 8, 2011
The line “I’m not able to find stick gum of love to stick my crack hear” really got my attention. It has many layers of meaning.
marqjonz on Nov 8, 2011
Whoops. Typo. That line ends with “heart.” The line works as a short poem on its own:

I’m not able to find

stick gum of love

to stick my crack heart
ImKarn23 on Nov 8, 2011
well done, gloomy..
smile!
Aswathy on Nov 8, 2011
Excellent work!
Each time u come up with something 2 be called “AEWSOME”
Let me ask u smething. Aren’t these pictures ur own creation(maybe with ur bro’s help)?
Aroosa Gloomy on Nov 8, 2011
@aswin 7 no dear i just download them and then write my own wordings on them.
vijayanths on Nov 8, 2011
awesome poem dear.
megamatt09 on Nov 8, 2011
Very thought provoking.
dwisuka on Nov 8, 2011
good work
Ruby Hawk on Nov 8, 2011
very, very dark and gloomy.
juliachild on Nov 8, 2011
Great share
straw1979 on Nov 8, 2011
excellent as always
thetoplad on Nov 8, 2011
nicee
TheTrax4 on Nov 8, 2011
nice, i like it…
athena goodlight on Nov 8, 2011
emotionally charged! good one
beingwell on Nov 8, 2011
Great job!
tnvrstar on Nov 8, 2011
Great Poem
lonelyplanet on Nov 9, 2011
Fantastic poem.
Eliza26 on Nov 9, 2011
Words and pictures work really well together.
ittech on Nov 9, 2011
very nice poem
naruto100 on Nov 9, 2011
Good one !!
realityspeaks on Nov 9, 2011
Dark. Excellent share
beingwell on Nov 9, 2011
Oh, I’ve been here before.
isloooboy on Nov 10, 2011
Very nice and cool full of life feelings I liked it
Grace Anne Carey on Nov 10, 2011
Wow, I loved this lots of great imagery throughout the whole poem, love the irony of it all.
multiplenews on Nov 10, 2011
Very interesting poem.
Mohamed Abdel Fattah Hussein on Nov 10, 2011
very good
Sahan Serasinghe on Nov 10, 2011
Really nice!!
Shaunak Vats on Nov 10, 2011
Really nice!! love both the images and the words
socialbookstatus on Nov 10, 2011
great share.
Elle64 on Nov 10, 2011
beautiful-and dark
V rank on Nov 11, 2011
This poem is very very nice to read…
Martin Kloess on Nov 11, 2011
very good.
ayeshar on Nov 11, 2011
i like the pictures you add with your poems. and nice poem , i like the ending line “but still I have reason to live”
rgreenfield on Nov 11, 2011
you put your thoughts so intense… thanks for sharing
Franwrihot82 on Nov 11, 2011
Umm it seems your pessimisome is your gift good work.
aaaaaaa on Nov 12, 2011
Well written
holdkunal on Nov 12, 2011
nice share with awesome images.
mtrguanlao on Nov 12, 2011
Another nice poem
nurzaira on Nov 12, 2011
beautiful and dark poem..
nurzaira on Nov 12, 2011
beautiful picture
Chinmay Chakravarty on Nov 13, 2011
Very well composed. Excellent illustrations.
Jay F. Samson on Nov 13, 2011
Wow, nice!
KittyK on Nov 14, 2011
The poem is lovely and the pictures give the visual…
zulfikar on Nov 14, 2011
a extraordinary piece of work. well framed, well decorated.
i like the sincere confession ‘ unplanned sins’.
JMorgan071 on Nov 14, 2011
Very nice!
DanielD on Nov 14, 2011
Great as always, my dear!
CutezSoNia on Nov 15, 2011
Good… I like the pictures too
Jonas N on Nov 15, 2011
Interesting
Andrew Handley on Nov 15, 2011
awesome poem
thetoplad on Nov 15, 2011
cool
AmosTheCat on Nov 15, 2011
I always tell myself that this time I will not be pulled into her world. But by the tenth line all I see is a haunting, shadowy, leafless forest on a ghostly moon lite night.
juliachild on Nov 16, 2011
Thanks for the share
ittech on Nov 17, 2011
thanks for this share nice
beingwell on Nov 17, 2011
Nice photos.
tonyleather on Nov 20, 2011
Awesome verse
girishpuri on Nov 22, 2011
Still you have reason to live , awesome
sheilanewton on Nov 23, 2011
What a well-crafted piece this is. Wonderful poetry – superb images.
I’ve noticed you in the comments of so many Triond writers, I thought I’d look you up. And I wasn”t disappointed. I\\\’ve added you as a friend. I hope you”ll maybe be my Triond friend too??
rizkiandreas on Nov 23, 2011
very interesting article, I really liked it,,
mdrkarim7 on Nov 24, 2011
Do I have to say a word!
Angelji on Nov 25, 2011
I love this Gloomy….can relate !
vardhanh71 on Nov 27, 2011
Good piece of work Aroosa……..
PHILLY DREAMER on Nov 30, 2011
Cheer up! Life is about ups and downs. We can’t know happiness without knowing sadness, so you have to take the good with the bad.
kelbix on Nov 30, 2011
A very nice one
nurzaira on Dec 5, 2011
again here
Vinaya says good bye on Feb 4, 2012
At this moment I can so much relate your words.
ebasearticles on Feb 15, 2012
Nice Like Me
dodolbete on Mar 18, 2012
I love this part “stars used to play hide and seek beside me”… very beautiful and imaginative ^_^
VV on Mar 29, 2012
nice, i like it…

Alas!

Hi there!

Find the Spot

Categories