Not much to say except Alas! Alas!

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Alas! Alas! The circle is broken,
We are lost, but no-one hast spoken,
Everything is in darkness,
I cannot see,
Not even that so close to me,
Where am I? for I cannot hear,
This silence is so crystal clear,
Without these senses the more I feel,
Allow the sky be-rain my skin,
I raise my hands to the clouds,
Thus I may bequeath my soul,
Allowing it to live again,
Without the knowledge of fear.

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  • hfj on Aug 5, 2009

    Nice poem dear. Without the knowledge of fear. Powerful words dear. Well done.

  • Poochie on Aug 6, 2009

    Marrrrrveeelious!!!!!

  • poochie on Aug 6, 2009

    Can I just adjust my spelling :) MARVELOUS!!!

  • Collette Edwards on Aug 11, 2009

    short powerfull piece, great job :)

  • Jacques Berkeley on Sep 3, 2009

    Wow!

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