Love haiku.

I’ll stop loving you

On the very same day blue

butterflies turn white.

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  • lillyrose on Nov 21, 2009

    Awwww so romantic!

  • drelayaraja on Nov 21, 2009

    Great idea. well butterflies do come in white. But never the blue one will lose its color.

  • AlmaG on Nov 21, 2009

    Lovely poem :)

  • Papa Sparks on Nov 21, 2009

    Nice one, Ken.

  • chitragopi on Nov 21, 2009

    Beautiful. Picture as well as haiku

  • Darla Cooke on Nov 21, 2009

    Lovely haiku and pic.

  • Jane Jane on Nov 21, 2009

    now that’s lovely.

  • deep blue on Nov 21, 2009

    A very enlightening metamorphosis.

  • PR Mace on Nov 21, 2009

    Very nice the softer side of Ken. It really was a lovely write.

  • cutedrishti8 on Nov 21, 2009

    Lovely work Sir..

  • svishnugopal on Nov 21, 2009

    it is really a wonderful imagination…great writing..

  • Lady Sunshine on Nov 21, 2009

    You old softie! This was so sweet. Love the pic.

  • Brenda Nelson on Nov 21, 2009

    really nice, haikus are always fun to read, great pic too!

  • Themax on Nov 21, 2009

    realy beautiful,Thank you :)

  • Guy Hogan on Nov 21, 2009

    Very nice. Very romantic. Very readable.

  • Tanya Wallace on Nov 21, 2009

    Awww this is so romantic! Wonderful haiku Ken!!

  • Ruby Hawk on Nov 21, 2009

    Ken,that’s so cute.

  • Daisy Peasblossom on Nov 22, 2009

    Awwwww!

  • wonder on Nov 24, 2009

    Why should you stop loving? Unfair!
    An excellent painting.

  • Ask Cash on Nov 25, 2009

    That photo is as electric as your Haiku

  • Grace Kathryn on Nov 26, 2009

    A sweet haiku. I’ve never seen a butterfly that color.

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