Alien in My Bed

T. S. Lewis on Apr 8, 2010

Tags: aliens, bad dream, body snatchers, Nightmare, octopus

A monosyllabic poem for my poetry class taken from a poem I wrote called Complexity of Sophistication.

Suck Pluck

Pop Cups

Reach and

Feel

It Moves

Swims climbs

Dives and

Wiggles

Ink blots

Float turning

Waters black

Eight arms

Writhing

Scary as

A space

Invader

Snatching

My body

Waking

By a pod;

Dreaming

I was

Trapped

In its vines,

Skin rinds

Peeled

And fell

As I

Became

A sea

Creature

Was so

Relieved

To find

It was

Just a

Sheet

That had

Entangled

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Comments (12)

LOVELYHONEY on Apr 8, 2010
ALIEN

i thought

lLION ….

single mono what ever

ITS gr88888888888888
Olive B. on Apr 9, 2010
interesting……..never written one of these, should try it sometime. cool!
yresh12 on Apr 9, 2010
what kind of alien would that be?hahah
Christine Ramsay on Apr 9, 2010
Lovely Honey must be honoured by such a tribute.

Christine
Christine Ramsay on Apr 9, 2010
Sorry about the above comment. It is on the wrong post.

I really enjoyed the read. It sounds like a nightmare.

Christine
lillyrose on Apr 9, 2010
*giggle at christine!*

I loved this very different read, it was clear and precise, well done
drelayaraja on Apr 9, 2010
Excellent
diamondpoet on Apr 9, 2010
‘very imaginative and cute, I am all smiles right now.
XXElleXX on Apr 12, 2010
Good use of language and imagery in this piece T.S. Lewis
Hehehe @Christine
Starpisces on Apr 12, 2010
a cool one!
Marie Antoinette on Apr 20, 2010
So different, I enjoyed it. Love the use of words which gave it a fast pace – just like when you awaken from a bad dream – that same fast movement. You captured it in your poem.
Authoress Terry E. Lyle on Apr 20, 2010
Nice one.

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