Stream of consciousness.

all alone on a saturday morning
everyones gone to the sky for the the weekend
everyones gone away
they’ve taken life with them
i sit here in the mixture of euphoria and distant drifting away
feel like summer has
feel like everything has disappeared and
feel like something beyond
days that disappear and reappear and
feel like i dont know and
i dont feel and
i dont understand and
the day disappears and the moment is up in the air
and there is something today
something more than everything and cloudy sky
and rest in euphoria
and feeling like
roads in evening sun
and golden and houses on the hillside
houses halfway up the hillside
houses feeling towards the sky
houses up in arms at everything
houses feeling
houses falling
houses making love to the sky
houses everything

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  • Linda Lori on Sep 10, 2009

    Very nice!

  • diamondpoet on Oct 5, 2009

    That was lovely.

  • TroostAvenue on Nov 17, 2009

    Wonderful construction. Liked the way you played the words feel and house. Very nice.

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