A good poem.

Felt the bone crack

Pain like attack

All because I hit a wall

When I had to dive for the ball

The doctor told me something bad

No more football he said

It’s that sad

I sat in my bed, dead

Crying like no other

I would’ve been allstate

But it was my brother

Who got the bait

And became a legend

All because I was all broken up

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  • Littlekid137 on Aug 16, 2009

    nice man!! How did you think of something so creative :)

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