Olden day miners trip to the coal face.

All for seven shillings a week
Deep into the black pits bowels sent
Herded in, crushed tight cheek to cheek
Riding this old creaky cage, of ghouls
Rocking side to side in descent
With ten other sweating souls
Ever deeper, much darker gloom
Only the pale amber candles glow incandescent
Shedding flickering shadows loom
Reeking the surrounding air smell
Filled with musk so sickly sweet
Slowly descending into hell
Cramped together it is no treat
Minutes roll by like hours
Suddenly jolted hitting the bottom in dusty showers
Swinging open the cage door to escape the stones
Passing men lined up, dirty black vagabonds they ignore
Wanting to make their ride into the sun, with blackened bones
All smeared with black streaks from their sweaty labour
Each grabbing either pick or shovel they shuffled
Finding their trolley each muffled
Sitting either side on planked seats
This transport to hells face hearts faster beats
Trolls down from the light
Mange infected pony thrusting itself forwards a sorry sight
Taking up the slack jerked back to reality ride
Deeper into the wood propped tunnel we glide
All for seven shillings a week

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  • Larry Fish on Jan 4, 2011

    Great one of the life of a miner.

  • PSingh1990 on Jan 4, 2011

    Nice Share.

    :-)

  • Michal Dorcak on Jan 4, 2011

    Great poem. I started imagining it all while reading it. I must say that I felt scared, angry and sad. I certainly would not want to be a miner back then (if I got it right and it is about the past of that job).

  • lxdollarsxl on Jan 4, 2011

    you did michal

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